Together
by midnightride2

Comment:
couple of things made this image not work for me: the look of disdain on the female model's face and the fact that we can't even see the male model's face..makes the whole image seem sordid in an emotionally painful way. As well, the focus being off makes it seem more like a one off shot. I hope this is helpful. I think the idea you were working with is wonderful.

Curves
by jxpfeer

Comment:
the little bit of OOF hair on the right distracts from the curves of the shot, which I think is a great theme to go with when doing a nude.

Olympic Dreams
by blemt

Comment:
great concept! Would have been really cool if the wheels were in motion. Also, the focus is off on the head of the model, which sort of throws me. I like that you have left a slight colouration on the shot..gives it a little something extra.

mother nature
by Seanachai

Comment:
the most subtly interesting thing about this shot is the shadows of the foliage on her body. I like how the model looks like a statue in a garden. lovely.

La Femme
by ScantyNebula

Comment:
i think its novel that she's nude and still wearing her glasses. I do wish the top of her head was in the shot, and maybe that we either got to see more of her, or there was more negative space to the right. I like the very bright feel to the shot and the softness your lighting has created.

Passion
by Firstrich1

Comment:
a very good use of selective desat! and very passionate despite the fact that we can't see either person's face. Maybe its that aspect that gives it a more "personal" feel because it could be the viewer.

Rough
by flip89

Comment:
awesome full frame, but his face seems OOF, and that's a shame because the whole image seems to cry out for sharpness given the rugged features of your model and the expression on his face. Also, the conversion to bw seems a bit..flat..tonal range too limited? I am not sure, but its a nice shot.

Ardency
by jonpink

Comment:
i think this is almost perfect. I would prefer to see all of his face or none at all, but I love the composition and the bw work. well done.

FREE WILLY
by siggi

Comment:
heida? lol This is great!

hands
by rhipster

Comment:
given your title, and the strained pose, I would have focused the lighting more on the hands rather than the curve of the back.