Surprising Myself
by Shelley

Comment:
Interesting idea to have a double exposure. Perhpas a bit brighter would help us to see your face better? I've never tried this so I don't know.

Maybe now they will quit calling me SHEila!!!
by Neuferland

Comment:
Adorable set up! Geat expressionon both faces! I wish the lighting had been done such that there would be no shadows or sharp shadows. Maybe crop in from top and bottom a bit.

A surprise gift lights up any face
by neenee1999

Comment:
Very visually poetic. The illumination of the bow in nice. Wish the wrapping were neater, and the book (?) to the left draws our attention away. Maybe a bit o light fro the side would help fill out the box, define its shape. Also I wish the box were aligned better with the edge o the picture, or completely at an angle to it.

Pop!
by ScantyNebula

Comment:
Fun idea. I like the blurr of other baloons in the background. Wish the yellow one and the fingers were more in focus.

This Wasn't Supposed to Happen!
by DiamondPete

Comment:
Ouch. Hard to get a sense of what is up and down, although I'm sure that is how this climber feels. Everything is shaken. If the rock were sharp, and the climber swingin all over at least we'd have a point of reference.

GUESS What I Found?
by GeneralE

Comment:
Tickles? Pretty cute belly with that rim of pants showing. I like the sepia tone - warm and flesh-like. Wish the fingernail was clean, and the texture of the skin is a bit flat. Still nicely done, show thought.

Will You Marry Me?
by jpb323red

Comment:
Neat idea - the ing is in the glass, I like how it has tilted in her hand as if she is just noticing. The lighting is almost completely blown out on the hand - we can;t see any details..and the light is glaring off the fingerprints on the glass. It is a good idea and a nice composition, but need better preparation befoer shooting.

The Ring
by TooCool

Comment:
I like that we can see both the ring and the look on her face, and even the gesture of her hands. The focus could be better and the scene should be less flatly lit.

What's up?
by sahko

Comment:
Cute and funny. Wish the mouse were facing the camera, he does look pretty mystfied from what I can see. Those are a great set of whiskers - wish we could see them better against the background - highlight them with lighting or use a dark background?

Snack time - Hey who did that?
by wkmen

Comment:
cookie monster? The light is too bright, and I wish there was better focus. I'd be upset if my cookies got eaten (not by me...) but I'd like to see the look on the persons face.