Clip Art
by hawkida

Comment:
*Critique Club*

Very different and orginal, definately fits the office art challenge. Your focus seems a bit soft and you have a lot of shadows from your lighting.

Take your time and make sure you focus and watch out for the shadows and next time you might just have an eye catcher.

Anna

creating Art at the office
by falvey

Comment:
Critique Club

Definately fits the challenge. It is very nicely in focus and there isn't any a lot of clutter to the image but at the same time it doesn't hold the interest. It is a fountain pen and that's it.

This could have worked if you did it at some unusual angle, or not having the main point of focus in the center the quill of the fountain pen should have been off to one of the sides rather than in the middle. It just doesn't work as it is.

Anna

All the Guys See Anyway
by shareinnc

Comment:
Great title and ain't it the truth!

bracelet
by imagesloyola

Comment:
Fantastic shot, thanks for letting all us women dream a little...nice bracelet by the way =o) You're a 10....ooops I mean the photos a 10. Now can ya do an encore for the black on black challenge afterall this is one fantastic low key image.

imperfect
by pupparazzo

Comment:
The title compliments nicely. No one is perfect! Your title is fantastic, makes me think just how imperfect the whole world really is. Nicely done!

Liquid&Solid
by Tiberius

Comment:
*Critique Club*

Interesting take for the liquid challenge definately meets the challenge. The focus is good. The composition is ok but might improve by being cropped so the egg isn't in the center. The one thing I don't like here is the color of the egg itself the shell is to creamy colored and the yolk just isn't as yellow as it should be which could possibly just be the lighting was to dark to bring out the true colors of the egg.

Very nice take for the liquid challenge keep up the good work.

Anna

Two Milk, No Sugar.
by BigSmiles

Comment:
*Critique Club*

Very nice image, definately meets the challenge, your focus is fantastic on this image.

The only thing I see that probably hurt you is the shadow and glare both going on in the same area just above the handle of the mug. It distracts from the entire image although it would also be hard to correct.

Very well done.

Anna

silhouette
by grigrigirl

Comment:
Simply beautiful, wonderful silhouette.

liquidify
by setecha

Comment:
*Critique Club*


Very interesting image. It appears to meet the challege as a liquid. My question is what kind of liquid is it? The bubbles in the liquid add interest to this. It does appear to have been slightly over sharpened and possibly generally overprocessed.

Take your time when taking an image and make sure it is in focus, it will save you a lot of time editing later and will keep from having the over processed look.

Anna

one for the scrapbook
by indigo997

Comment:
*Critique Club*

Stunning image, a well deserved win. Your composition on this is outstanding. This definately meets the challenge. The seapia tones work well for this gives it that aged fill. Your lighting on this makes it interesting. Wonderful dof and the focus is perfect for the image.

Very little I would change the only thing I see that might improve slightly is the glare on the desk edge from the light, and even that really isn't all that much.

Very nicely done, congrats on the ribbon.

Anna