t e a m w o r k
by hotpasta

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I actually already commented on this image, so I won't bother repeating myself.

Well done!

Home
by CorySmith

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The only thing that kept this image from scoring even higher (setting aside ridiculous political voting) is the font. This is a great photo and works perfectly with your quotation. If you had gone with more of a classic font, at least on the word Home, the message would have much more impact on the poster and the whole package would just come together perfectly.

This was a great capture. I think the score this got was well deserved.

Stretch Yourself
by stanm2

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Whenever possible, you should try and submit an image that is as large as allowed by the ruleset and conforms fairly closely to the classic ratios we are used to seeing (2:3, 4:5, etc). This image looks a bit squashed due to the crop.

Great capture and it works well with the quote. There may have been other quotes that might have resonated better with viewers (look before you leap comes to mind), but this is ok.

The font choice doesn't work well at all. Perhaps it is supposed to give a humorous feel? There's just nothing about the image that a far-east sort of font complements or is complemented by.

True Love
by andrea22_als

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Probably the best way to approach this challenge would be to ask yourself if you would spend a few hundred dollars on this and hang it in the lunch room where you work.

The image here is very, very out of focus. I remember seeing this in the forums and you questioning if this was a function of resizing. Hopefully you've sorted that out.

The quote itself is ok and certainly goes along with the photo, but the font used does not deliver the message with much impact and its placement on the photo might work better if beneath the ring.

OPPORTUNITY
by snaffles

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Good choice of imageto go along with your message.

Choice of font for the image itself is ok, though the key word could be much larger as really it is the 'point' of the poster. The color of the font isn't the best for this scene as part of the word blends into the photo beneath.

The photo is nice, but a bit on the soft side.

The Path To Success
by albc28

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Very odd choice of image and message (or message and image). A step to success is a bench?

Photo itself is very nice, particularly how it fades to black towards the bottom. This probably would have popped more if all the text were at the bottom of the shot in the dark area. The top line looks a bit 'crammed in' and works against a sense of balance for the poster as a whole.

Think Outside The Box
by marvin

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Certainly a creative entry. Clever to match the warped font with the warped candle.

The image itself really pulls this poster down. Lot of dirt (or something) on the white background and some shadows here and there which don't flatter the subject.

Overall, I think this is really out of the box so in that sense you presented something that really did present the message you wanted to get across.

Happiness Is Contagious!
by 777STAN

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Photo matches the message well - a happy face to reinforce a motivation to maintain a happy disposition.

Both the shot and the word happiness seem to be a little on the pinkish side. This impression is reinforced by the pink color of the quote itself. I think a bit of white balance adjustment on the photo would go a long way towards making this poster pop overall, and perhaps putting Happiness in a simple bright white would enhance the poster as well.

Never forget those who gave all
by RulerZigzag

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I gather this is a war memorial, though I don't know which one. That's a tough thing for a motivational poster as it really needs to connect instantly and completely with the viewer.

The photo itself is nice, though there are areas where it is poking out from its border. This sort of comes across as lack of attention to detail, even if it was done by choice.

Good match of quote with imagery. A different placement of the quote and a bit stronger style of font may have given it more impact.

Beauty Power Wealth : Stay In School
by Dr.Confuser

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Your outtake nails everything that the original shot came up short on. Really great shot of the car. If the model were flashing that smile at the camera this would have been over the top.