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09/15/2007 11:39:24 AM |
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Probably the best way to approach this challenge would be to ask yourself if you would spend a few hundred dollars on this and hang it in the lunch room where you work.
The image here is very, very out of focus. I remember seeing this in the forums and you questioning if this was a function of resizing. Hopefully you've sorted that out.
The quote itself is ok and certainly goes along with the photo, but the font used does not deliver the message with much impact and its placement on the photo might work better if beneath the ring. |
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09/09/2007 03:57:59 PM |
| Good sentiment, and the picture goes with it. I wish the ring were much better in focus though, and maybe not placed quite so centrally in the image. |
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09/09/2007 03:15:14 AM |
| Interesting subject, works for the challenge. |
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09/08/2007 02:08:56 PM |
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09/07/2007 02:06:51 PM |
| I would've like to have seen the ring in more focus. Maybe a font thats a little easier to see. Otherwise, a nice composition. |
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09/06/2007 04:04:41 PM |
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09/06/2007 03:30:11 PM |
| I think you need to have a little more detail, less blur and some better light. The font doesn't work for me either. Keep working at it. |
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09/06/2007 12:15:05 AM |
| Not a bad idea, but try to get it out of dead center, brighten it up, and really pay attention to focus. |
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09/05/2007 06:55:19 PM |
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09/03/2007 10:35:29 PM |
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09/03/2007 11:04:05 AM |
| This image is a bit out of focus. |
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09/03/2007 02:26:04 AM |
| I think this shot needs better focus. |
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09/03/2007 12:11:45 AM |
| I would prefer to see a bit stronger focus. Consider moving the ring off center a bit. May make the photo more interesting. |
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