Day 02
by darnok

Comment:
Great night shot, great detail, and sharpness. I don't really care for the two bright lights over the fence on the L but otherwise very dynamic.

Jack

Day 03
by darnok

Comment:
Wow, this is spectacular. I really like the lines in this one. The gentle curse of the leaves really play off the curves in the folower petals. The lighting really effectively enhances that. Honestly though I'm not sold on the the other flower that goes off on it's own angle, is blurred, and has enough bright areas to attract attention. You may want to think about shooting this with that part taken out. I'll admit it will tough to frame it effectively. Great shot and really very nice lighting.

Jack

PAD B&W Day 2 Untitled
by noraneko

Comment:
The grain is very effective IMO, I don't care too much for the halos around the hair, does look like a dodge and burn done without enough care. The picture though is fantastic, great moment with tough but effective lighting. Looks like it was fairly harsh given the shadows yet you still got great skin tones. Really super image.

Jack

Just read Peter's comments and couldn't agree more.

Message edited by author 2007-05-03 15:23:21.

Tina's
by Retroesque

Comment:
Really cool, and I like the little feet on the other side! Another easter egg!

Jack

Day 3 - Wedding
by bdenny

Comment:
Great moment, nice conversion, good compositon.. I really like their hands.

Jack

The Pavilion by Night b&w
by jdannels

Comment:
Nope, the B&W is better to my eye. Great shot.

Day 3
by TDCollins

Comment:
Overall I like the processing for this which seems appropriate for your subject and the effect you are going for. I like the grainyness too, but perhaps a bit too much in the sky. Finally if you're going to process this far I would try and get rid of the cars on the lower R of the picture. OVerall though it's an effective picture.

Jack

Day 2
by edmeng

Comment:
Cool shot, good screen shot to show your PP. Very effective selective lighting with the curves and mask - nice job darkening the sky and the foreground area. Very sharp too. From a compostional standpoint I like the foreground leading into the building, I find the sky somewhat distracting (even though it is processed great) and I also find the tree on the L breaking up the nice diagonal line and repeating curves of the roofline.

Great job though, and thanks for the screen shot.

Jack

3 -Tags
by Jutilda

Comment:
Wow what a beautiful animal. I think I would have tried a bit of fill flash to fill in some shadows but you did a great job having him pose for you. I bit of a vignette may have helped also darken the corners, but the bright area on the gate really helps to pop him out. NIce job, Jack

House of Sand and Fog
by noraneko

Comment:
Very nice, I think you're on the right track, but I agree with others that said to go for it - I think it could use more contrast, and a bit of diagonal to avoid the long vertical line of the fence. Great job, Jack