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05/08/2007 07:22:52 PM |
| The deep contrast is really working for me here - great dramatic shapes, and you caught the texture in the concrete very well. Maybe the upper part of the sky could use a bit of lightening, just so the tops of the trees don't completely disappear, but overall I think the darkness suits the subject. |
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05/05/2007 11:00:31 PM |
| Nice geometry and placement. My only comment would be I would rather have seen the dark edit at the top left to match closer to the darkness at the bottom. Being so much darker it draws your eyes up and away from the artscape IMO. |
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05/05/2007 07:35:46 PM |
| Wow, for a second I thought this was something you would see outside a museum of modern art - in fact I thought that this might be one sculpture at a Museum of Modern Art that I have passed from time to time but never stopped to visit. This composition has lots of WOW factor. Love the tones and contrasts here and that sculpture takes center stage. The triangle art really pops off the page being that it's tones really pop off from the dark sky above and the ground below. Love the shapes of the repeating pattern on the triangles and each one is razor sharp with details from the one in the foreground to the last one in the back. Great job. |
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05/03/2007 08:59:34 PM |
| If it was in a challenge you'd get a good score from me. Awesome! |
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05/03/2007 07:29:10 PM |
| Really nice. I'm a big fan of architectural geometry. Boy this suits that bill perfectly. I like the darkness around the triangles. |
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05/03/2007 03:56:44 PM |
| The angle is striking, as is the subject. It's very dynamic, even if we don't know what it is. In my opinion, the whole photo is a bit dark so that detail gets lost. I like the sky and trees in the background. If they were a wee bit lighter it would possibly benefit the affect of the photo. |
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05/03/2007 02:20:05 PM |
Actually something this heavily edited, especially heavily dodged and burned, would probably do well in a challenge...
I like this shot. The geometric shapes it presents appeal to me. I think a tighter crop (even a square crop) might work a little better, especially considering you burned off the top third of the shot anyway. Nice leading lines to draw the eye through the structure and some nice detail on the structure itself.
Nice shot. |
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05/03/2007 11:40:10 AM |
| I like the processing. It makes the artwork the focal point and brings out its texture. |
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05/03/2007 11:18:14 AM |
| very nice graphics in this, i like the composition a lot. |
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05/03/2007 10:59:43 AM |
| Nice lighting on that interesting subject -- whatever it is :) I think this is photographed so well in low light because you can see such amazing detail in the texture of the structure. It really makes a nice black and white photo in the setting it's in. |
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05/03/2007 10:08:27 AM |
| I really like the processing...Maybe a little less grain in the sky? But overall, you have got some great tones going on. What a neat find! |
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05/03/2007 09:02:55 AM |
| It is a great photo and I like how you did the processing. |
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05/03/2007 08:44:27 AM |
| That's a cool work of art and you've captured great detail in it. I think the sky is a bit dark, I'd prefer to see more detail with clouds. |
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05/03/2007 08:35:39 AM |
Geez...I would be PROUD to submit this in a voting challenge :P
I love the PP but I would crop most of the sky out. It's a very, very nice image! |
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05/03/2007 08:09:18 AM |
Agree with  sherpet it really pulls you into the center, not sure about the sky, overall a good portrayal. |
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05/03/2007 06:59:15 AM |
| You have certainly done this sculpture justice. Like the treatment on the scuplture itself but the sky seems overly dark particularly over the tree. |
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05/03/2007 06:46:27 AM |
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05/03/2007 06:34:04 AM |
Overall I like the processing for this which seems appropriate for your subject and the effect you are going for. I like the grainyness too, but perhaps a bit too much in the sky. Finally if you're going to process this far I would try and get rid of the cars on the lower R of the picture. OVerall though it's an effective picture.
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05/03/2007 05:54:00 AM |
| I love the way the triangular shapes, draws one right into the centre.....Awesome..... |
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05/03/2007 03:57:08 AM |
| OK here is the fun/maddening thing about comments...They often contradict each other...Think its a very striking image, but I dont like the pp effect on the sky. Personally I would crop just above the piece of art |
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05/03/2007 01:52:13 AM |
| I would give it an 8 on a voting challenge. I think its well composed and expertly post processed. |
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