Here comes the sun
by alexgarcia

Comment:
Hi Alex!

Ahh, one of my challenge twins! Congrats on picking such a fine title for your entry ;-)

I can't say I don't like the concept, but I think the sunrises and sunsets probably gave the voters the impression that the entries were shoehorned in.

From a more technical perspective, it's a rather dull sunrise, with little texture and color variation in the sky. The buildings along the shore are rather uninteresting, and the pier(?) in the foreground is really distracting.

Enlightening
by DigiFotoBuddy

Comment:
Hi Shailesh!

I definitely think you suffered from the problem that truth and perception are not one in the same. Without knowing how this was done, it does look like at least two light sources. Knowing after the fact how it was done, it's truly ingenious, but we don't know that during voting.

As a photograph in general, some things I would do are to let the model's hair down to spill over her shoulders, put her in a black shirt to match the background, and add a reflector in front to reflect light onto her face and hands. I'd love to see the serene meditative expression on her face, and her mudhras currently are lost in the dark.

Engrossed
by margiemu

Comment:
Hi Margie!

Nice work here! I'll echo what others have said about the reflected light, that's really an inventive and yet totally commonplace use of a single light source. Heh! I might have tried to shoot this a more of a side angle so it looked more candid - it's easier to sneak up on people from the side than straight on, so a slightly sideways shot might have looked more.. natural? believable? Not sure of the word I'm searching for. Congrats on finishing in your own top four!

Desvasidized
by blackenedwhite

Comment:
Hi OJ!

High scoring photos are always hard to critique, so I'm generally rather brief about them.

I like the world of darkness comic book feel of this photo. There is a terrific texture in your skin here that lends the image a nice grittiness. The soft focus works well, and the blown highlights give an impression of heat. I also like that your hair is in your eyes, but perhaps there is just a touch too much there.

Jalapeno
by fotomann_forever

Comment:
I'm all for artistic negative space, but there's just too much of it here.

One and a half Apple's a Day
by djtj1980

Comment:
Lose the border. It's a clashing shade and distracting from the image.

grass with dew
by shaundp

Comment:
Nice texture here, would like to see it a bit larger and with more vibrancy.

horse
by maryares

Comment:
So cute, but too small.

Fortifications of the Future
by m

Comment:
This was a very brave choice of photo. I will not be surprised if it doesn't score very well because it doesn't incorporate the color. The title renders your point even more obscure than it would be with something clearer like "At the Recycling Center".

Olivitaly
by Rino63

Comment:
Viva Italia!