cruz
by charliev

Comment:
Nothing really sets the cross off from the background. It's all yellow. Maybe in b&w? Also, there's a lot of pattern in the background that draws the eye away from the cross.

Five a Day
by mpeters

Comment:
I wish you hadn't cut off the top of the pineapple.

derranged seating
by Bus352

Comment:
I'd like to see a little more definition in the upper left. 6 for composition and use of b&w. 0 for your spelling. 8)

The Twist
by Younger

Comment:
I don't think a black background was the best choice here. You've got an interesting shape and goold light and colors, but because the glass is clear, the black background interferes and you lose the shape of the objects, especially at the right of the bottle.

trapezoids
by AzCKelly

Comment:
Good idea, but the pink portion at the right has gone out of focus. Spoils the composition.

Roundness of Toilet Paper
by MochaNova1987

Comment:
Needs to be in focus.

Red beauty
by Krisby

Comment:
This has a lot of potential, but I think your lighting is a little harsh. Did you only use a flash. Also, IMHO, the perspective could be improved. I'd like to see you shooting the lamp shade straight on, so we just get the shape, and don't see the gathered material at the top. I'd also straighten the fringe at the bottom.

Venus de Shell...oh
by Joy Moore

Comment:
Needs to be sharper.

Columns
by banmorn

Comment:
I can't make up my mind if this is a shape picture, a texture picture, or a pattern picture. It's got it all!

Arch-shaped Blooms
by davidus428

Comment:
I really like the shallow DOF on this one, but IMHO it's a little too shallow. That spiral curve at the tip of the bloom is really interesting, and it goes all fuzzy.