Exuberance Original
by hotpasta

Comment:
Boy I like the original as much as the one you submitted. It must give you a great sense of pride to work with these people, your a good man.

Maralel Mum
by hotpasta

Comment:
What great colors and I love the desat treatment here. I think you may have included her left shoulder in the desat by mistake.

Samburu Girl, Kenya
by hotpasta

Comment:
Enzo this is a very nice photo and I'm sure it brings back powerful feelings for you. Along with sharpening as you mentioned I would like to add consider cropping in from the right some to get her out of the middle of the frame. Very good work

John

In Shadow
by debitipton

Comment:
Very nice portrait, I love the lighting. Fits challenge perfectly, well done

The Lookout
by Ristyz

Comment:
Brave choice to submit this in B&W as I am sure this is a very colorful shot. I don't care much for the dog looking to the short side of the frame but it still works. 7

Urban Elements
by Germaine

Comment:
There are a lot of elements drawing attention in this shot. The lamp seems to be the main subject but the railing and post draw me away. Also the door is so large that it detracts as well. It's hard to tell what the rest of the building looks like but maybe if you moved over a bit and used the door as your subject? Hope this helps.

On the Sidelines
by madcrabber

Comment:
Now here we have another fine example of ROT. You we very good to have this lighting and a better eye to take the photo. the little blue house in the background draws some attention but I understand if you didn't want to move it. 9 for now

turnstile
by chele

Comment:
For my taste there are to many lines running through the photo to be an effect ROT example. I can seem to keep my eye on the exit sign without having to look at the rest of the picture.

Mmm Mmm Good
by TommyMoe21

Comment:
I justed voted on the girl in the water shot and to come to this is a bit of a shock. I do however feel this is a much better fit the the challenge. Lacks a bit of contrast but there is good detail and this is an entertaining shot. Best of luck. 9

The lady in the water
by LalliSig

Comment:
I would have liked to have seen the model on the other side of the frame with her face pointing to the empty area of picture, I think I can see that she is looking at the camera, but all the same my eyes run to the left on this photo which is the small side. Also I would have liked her placed more to the top of the frame, her arms and torso provide me with a diving line that is closer to the middle of the frame. Very nice photo and I would guess this is going to finish on the front page.