Feeling The Jazz
by frumoaznicul

Comment:
Greetings from Critique Club!

From Romania! My sister-in-law is from Romania!

Anyway, this is a great shot! I love it! Had I the chance to vote I would have given it a 7 or 8. The overall composition, the motion on the hands, it's all great. But the high contrast is not really there for me. Some is there but nothing that really stands out against each other, lots of grays.

But again, a great shot otherwise.

Hope this helps.

Deannda

seed pods
by U622

Comment:
Greetings from the Critique Club.

THis is a very interesting shot. The almost x-ray quality of it makes it interesting to look at and without the title would make one wonder just what it was.

The lighting on the left is a bit harsh and the post processing made it blow out, while offering a contrast to the black background doesn't really pull off as white as much as a really bright silver.

The grain would normally work with a shot like this but this one it ends up being more of a distraction to me in the end. I like the crop and the sizing, but maybe if it was smoothed out a bit, not so much texture. Hope my comments help.

Deannda

Complexity of nature
by train

Comment:
Greetings from the Critique Club!

WOW! I love this shot, when I scroll up and down over the shot I get a really cool optical effect, LOL! :)

This is a wonderful high contrast shot but I'm betting it didn't do as well as you would have liked for a couple of reasons.

One, lack of focus, it seems soft or slightly out of focus. On a shot like this I like to see sharp, clear edges and lots of details.

Second, the cropping could be done just a bit differently. Maybe set it up so the petals on the bottom are just like the top, right out or in the corners. The colors are great, maybe just a bit over saturated but they do provide wonderful contrast.

I hope my comments help

Deannda

Heaven Is A Factory
by danderson107

Comment:
Greetings from the Critique Club!

What a beautiful shot! I love the clouds, the smoke stacks, it's very surreal.

The only thing I can see really wrong with this shot is the lack of a lot of contrast, at least high contrast. The contrast is there, just not very well defined to me. But the balance seems just a bit off, maybe a little tighter crop on the right to bring the stacks more in line. The capture of the puff of cloud on the left is fantastic!

Also, it just a bit too orange for my taste but that's me, maybe if it was touch more sepia brown?

Hope my comments help.

Deannda

High contrast Eye
by jellyoooo

Comment:
Greetings from the Critique Club!

This is a very interesting shot. I like the use of negative space used on the left, adding the white for your contrast. But on the left you really have more grays than any set black, not really offering anything for the High part of the contrast.

The face on the left has a very good expression, it really fits the shot overall. The softness works well and the hair strand right on the edge is also a great touch. A bit more darkness on that side would really make this shot jump out.

Hope my comments help.

Deannda

Disturbing the Waters
by kmbr2001

Comment:
Wow.

I love this shot! The simplicity, the contrast, the composition.

Oh, Greetings from the Critique Club! Sorry, the beauty of your shot distracted me from what I was here for. To critique your shot. This isn't going to be easy. The overall shot is fantastic, beautiful and well done. The contrast is perfect. About the only thing that would make this shot a 10 for me (would have been a 9 if I had time to vote) is a bit more clarity on the birds, they seem just a bit blurred or noisy, not sure which.

Otherwise, WELL DONE!!!

Deannda

Black and White
by hsteg

Comment:
Greetings from the Critique Club!

This is an interesting shot, you are right, Black and White, nothing more contrasting than that. :)

I like the idea, the fact that you colored it yourself and stayed inside the lines! I could never do that, LOL :)

The lines work well but the hand at the top is a bit much. You want the marker and the fingers but I used my magic envelope and cropped it just below the white area on the marker and it really brought the attention back to the black and white area. The lighting is a bit flat, maybe a slight adjustment on that to really make it pop?

Hope my comments help!

Deannda

Four Coned
by neophyte

Comment:
Oooooo, look at the pretty colors! :)

Greetings from the Critique Club! I remember seeing this shot in the thumbnails, didn't get a chance to vote, but it did catch my eye in the quick review. I'm suprised this didn't score higher! The contrast is there without a doubt. I'm guessing the only problem I can really see with the shot is the lack of detail on the top two cones compared to the bottom two. The tops of the cones become blurred almost, you lose that circle that is so well defined in the lower cones. Also the lighting is a bit unbalance, there are more reflections on the top than the bottom, dealing with natural lighting can be so much fun sometimes, no? ;) Maybe if you could redo this with more balanced lighting to create equal reflections on all the cones.

Sorry I couldn't offer more suggestions but this is a very good shot and I would have given it an 8 or 9 if I had time to vote then. :)

But I love the optical illusion that it creates, you should consider setting this up for a print!

Deannda

Old Saw Blade
by Bowerbird

Comment:
Greetings from the Critique Club!

This is a very interesting shot, it really makes me look twice at it and then even a third or fourth time. The use of grayscale is very well done. But the lack of contrast is probably what hurt it overall in the challenge. If I had time to vote I would have probably given this a 6 or 7 for creativity but not much higher because the contrast is just not quite there. I see lots of gray and black but no definitive white.

Also the upper left corner is a bit distracting, maybe if you cropped the top lower to take out the curved area, it takes away from the sharp edges of the rest of the shot. I really like the idea and the overall composition of the shot. Well done overall.

Deannda

Splashy Reflection
by marmalade1121

Comment:
Looking at the montage you posted, if you had used the red version, oversaturated or not, I bet you would have had a top 10 finish! I love this shot but the muted colors probably hurt it in the overall scores. But a great capture and I'm glad to see I'm not the only mom who lets her kids play in puddles, did you teach her how to do it properly like I had to teach my oldest? :)

Great shot