seein red
by stephanieshaw

Comment:
The reds are nice, but focus and lighting needs some improvement.

Broken Heart
by h2

Comment:
Really nice idea. Try to get it even more sharp and get rid of the flecks on the background and the shadow. Whites and reds together are a thankful subject.

Mother's sacrifice
by centurian

Comment:
I think this would be better with a little bit braver lighting, placed further from the background in order to avoid the harsh shadow. Try to expose the whites well first, if needed, diffuse lights, so you can avoid overexposure on the darks.

Broken Heart
by swallace

Comment:
This shot would be more interesting from a lower angle. Also needs more lights, and more diffused lights to avoid the darkness mixed with blow outs and the out of focus effect.

UH-O!!!!
by meow

Comment:
Nice idea, though, quality should be better, and somehow the photo lacks the colours. My compact does similar when I take the shot in weak natural lights.

Airborne Dis-ease
by dizzydean3

Comment:
Composition is quite good, but I am not familiar with the quality. Overexposion is distracting on the pilot's face, but even makes the whole shot quite unnatural.

Pickets
by skewsme

Comment:
Composition is a bit confused (maybe because of the background as well), and the laying pickets are overexposed. The whole subject seems to be out of focus.

Wine
by _eug

Comment:
I found your photo in DrAchoo's thread. I did not read the comments before, I just add a few small issues, maybe they help.

Alltogether a nice shot with only little things that could be done different, I like the shades of blue and the reflection very much. I usually try to avoid plane compositions in one level. I would move either the bottle or the glass a little bit more to the front to give it an essence of depth. A little backlightin would make the wine beautiful transparent, and I also would bring them more to the front in hope of KO-ing the edge of the table and wash the background all together and make the label readable on the bottle. The cleaniness of the glass is another little issue: if you look at it hard, you can see the splash of pouring the wine in. Be more careful, the glass has to be chrystal clear.

Just small things that may improve this one. I hope it helps.

Message edited by author 2006-02-09 02:05:33.

Sweets For My Sweet
by idnic

Comment:
I like the colours and the tilting is brave, lighting is nicely done and your shot works, because I am definitely got in the mood of eating up a box of chocolate. :-)

I skipped voting for this entry because however it's a good one, when thinking about romance I associate to people (moreover rather adults than kids). I was confused, because I missed the people, though this was too good to vote low, therefore I skipped it. I guess a lot of voters choose voting lower instead. Don't be upset because of the final score. If you had fun making this one, that's what matters!

A Model's Fantasy
by Azrifel

Comment:
Must be Kiwiness and Nasti! Ya' lucky man! :-)