Dream Cars
by orussell

Comment:
Neat idea! Very clear shots. Lighting is harsh and glaring. The angled views of the cars is very nice. This is a bit of a nit (and probably asking for too much), but two Porsches and a Toyota? I would suggest more variety or less (no points involved at all). 7 Rob the Swash

A Day on The East Lancashire Railway
by Paulk

Comment:
Nice series! I really like the two cells on the left, good feeling for trains coming and going. The upper right frame is very good with extremely difficult lighting, but it doesn't show me what they are doing (keeping the audience guessing might be a good thing, but I doubt it). The lower right frame is well focused, but the overcast takes away quite a bit of the spendor (maybe shotting this more level would have looked better). 7 Rob the Swash

retired, but still attracting people
by kenbo

Comment:
Good collection of train parts. I like the top frame best. The middle frame seems a tad over exposed, the red seems so bright as to be unnatural (but I'm going to assume the painter found a VERY bright paint). Lower frame has some parts that seem over exposed, too (same silver colored parts). This is a difficult challenge due to the small frames needed. You got close enough for nice details, maybe too close to get a feel for the machinery. Very hard to call (too close vs not enough detail), I honestly think you did pretty well. 7 Rob the Swash

Life of Steel
by OneSweetSin

Comment:
All well taken images. The center one is a bit hard to tell what it is, but the others seem pretty recognizable. Seems more like that latter half "Life of Steel", how about Rust Starts Here? It's a nice collection of shots, but I'm having a hard time getting into it. 7 Rob the Swash

Rite of Passage
by DougPaz

Comment:
Good idea for a series. The color and choice of backgrounds is very nice. Lighting is great for the first cell, but a bit too glaring for the center cell, in between for the last cell. Though the first and last cells are close to the same arrangement, the extra green in the last cell is a bit distracting. 7 Rob the Swash

golf
by buzzrock

Comment:
Nice story, good color. Focus seems very good, but due to the size of the frames, some of the detail is harder to see. I think the first frame works best, but I have no idea how to replicate that for the other two frames. 7 Rob the Swash

Bud ~ Yellow Tulip
by ladpupmoe

Comment:
Neat series, very bright! The white background works very well with the green bud, but not as well for the yellow open tulip, it seems on the stark side. I think I would have liked the leaves more evenly portrayed, too. 7 Rob the Swash

Dreams of a Bay Window
by mbardeen

Comment:
Well constructed series...first glance, this could be a single photo, scene changes nicely "hidden". As I write this critique, the depth of this image is growing on me. Score upgrade from 7 to 8. Rob the Swash

Alisha
by sherryk471

Comment:
Neat series, lovely child. The watercolor filter is nicely applied here (never seen it used so well!). That said, the effect used takes this series much closer to good artwork and less like photos. The egdes of the images are very nicely blended.
7 Rob the Swash

Story of a portrait
by bcncrazy

Comment:
Is the face appearing in the hair on purpose? These three views do show an interesting evolution of the image, but the manipulations take the images a long way from photographic. I like the first cell best, I find it interesting how the facial lines seem most appearant in the starkest view. 7 Rob the Swash