Electric Dreams of a Passionate Mother
by LeeD

Comment:
Very funky! I would have edited out that dark line that runs across the abdomen, and maybe used a less squishy surface (so the model wouldn't sink so much into it), but the basic concept is great!

Phantasy
by nidan

Comment:
Definitely interesting, but I find the jet-black shapes in the background distracting. I'd prefer a tighter crop and all the background either jet black or that mottled dark gray, but not a mix. Also a subtle splash of light on the two faces might give the viewer's eye more to hang onto, without ruining the lovely intemacy. In any case, a daring attempt that is undoubtedly too "arty" for many DPC'ers, but keep it up!

Abstract Curves
by sbeaumont

Comment:
A lot like my entry in Nude I. Although I too am a fan of simple abstract subjects, I think you are stretching the envelope by limiting yourself to just the shape of the outline. I would have included at least some elements of skin texture, 3D shape defined by shadows, or possibly color contrast (with a non-black background).

relax
by irishempress

Comment:
Such wonderful freckles! Shallow DOF works well and pose too. I sort of like the lighting, but at the same time I wish the foreground highlights (her breasts, the bed) were whiter. Not sure if it's the blueish cast that's bothering me, or if they just need to be brighter. 8

...with gaea...
by mesmeraj

Comment:
I bet this photo would make a fabulous poster. I'ts well composed and lit, and the concept is great. But when it's only 640 pixels tall, it leaves me wishing you had made the model a larger part of the frame. Then the contrast between her smooth skin and the tangle of plants would have been more obvious.

Release
by Geocide

Comment:
What a great pose! But I'm not fond of the graininess, especially in her hair which looks bizarrely like it's been photocopied.

Body Art
by Sonifo

Comment:
Very elegant, and I like the double meaning of the title.

Bauhaus
by whiteroom

Comment:
Intriguing, but maybe a bit too visually complex? But definitely makes you want to know the story...

divine freedom
by saintaugust

Comment:
Love the pose and lighting, but the sharpening artifacts (hair, ear, outline of face) are distracting.

First Nude
by phylsy7

Comment:
Great composition! Just wish the tattoo were sharper and more contrasty.