Tangle
by pcody

Comment:
Your homage to the old masters is admirable. I bet that took a lot of very careful posing and light adjusting! It may be my monitor, but the highlight on her thigh seems to have a warmer tone than any other part of the image (which would mean this isn't a duotone). Also, the transition into shadow seems a little too rapid, maybe the result of over-adjustment of curves? But I realize just how hard this is, you should be proud of what you have accomplished. 8

Simply Irresistible
by Nald

Comment:
You certainly win the price for most innovative lighting! The pose doesn't quite work for me. I like the strong diagonal composition, but I would prefer to see either less or more of her face and likewise either her entire leg or a tighter crop. But the light-painting really is marvelous! 8

Constans
by heida

Comment:
Very well lit and posed! The muscle definition and skin texture is just right. I'm not sure he needs that much empty space above his head, and the black frame against the nearly black background doesn't really help. But this is still my favorite of the male nudes. 9

Lone Dancer At Window
by Balko

Comment:
Very well done, great lighting and foreground/background contrast. The pose is lovely, but I keep thinking she is unbalanced. I don't think it's the pose, but rather the empty space in front of her. My guess is that vertical full-body framing would have turned this very good photo into a superb one. 8

The Puppeteer's Joy
by docpjv

Comment:
Very original! A full-body pose that made your model look small against the stark white wall (and ribbons) might have even more impact, but is obviously logistically harder to accomplish. Excellent work - 8

Electric Dreams of a Passionate Mother
by LeeD

Comment:
Very funky! I would have edited out that dark line that runs across the abdomen, and maybe used a less squishy surface (so the model wouldn't sink so much into it), but the basic concept is great!

Phantasy
by nidan

Comment:
Definitely interesting, but I find the jet-black shapes in the background distracting. I'd prefer a tighter crop and all the background either jet black or that mottled dark gray, but not a mix. Also a subtle splash of light on the two faces might give the viewer's eye more to hang onto, without ruining the lovely intemacy. In any case, a daring attempt that is undoubtedly too "arty" for many DPC'ers, but keep it up!

Abstract Curves
by sbeaumont

Comment:
A lot like my entry in Nude I. Although I too am a fan of simple abstract subjects, I think you are stretching the envelope by limiting yourself to just the shape of the outline. I would have included at least some elements of skin texture, 3D shape defined by shadows, or possibly color contrast (with a non-black background).

relax
by irishempress

Comment:
Such wonderful freckles! Shallow DOF works well and pose too. I sort of like the lighting, but at the same time I wish the foreground highlights (her breasts, the bed) were whiter. Not sure if it's the blueish cast that's bothering me, or if they just need to be brighter. 8

...with gaea...
by mesmeraj

Comment:
I bet this photo would make a fabulous poster. I'ts well composed and lit, and the concept is great. But when it's only 640 pixels tall, it leaves me wishing you had made the model a larger part of the frame. Then the contrast between her smooth skin and the tangle of plants would have been more obvious.