Bama Countryside
by neenee1999

Comment:
this seems to be underexposed, the color of the trees could be brighter, thers really no object to this photo except to show us this mountain, which is beutifull but the exposure is off. what would have maybe been better would have been to get the mountain on the left side and praire on the right and show us both of the landscapes.

Autumn Flow
by neokaitiger

Comment:
this is a good photo, it shows a begining a middle and an end, like a story thats what landscape is all about i love the color of the trees.
if you would have used a slow shutter speed the water would look soft and gentle instead of mean and rough, the white border should have been black it would have brang out the color of the sky and trees better,

Sonoran Desert
by oOWonderBreadOo

Comment:
I think the Composition is good, the color is good,
but i feel that its too close, all bunched up in the frame, if it were drawn out more like a story telling picture a beginin a middle and an end this photo would be much better. the dust spots you cant edit in basic editing but you might want to get your sensor cleaned.

STOP! I'm busy!
by undecorated

Comment:
Im sorry but why would you even submit this to the challenge, there is no focus, i can barely see that it is a person, and how do you look busy.........

F11_1_500shutterbee.jpg
by kenskid

Comment:
This one is much more better then that last, still i would back up a little and crop in for effect, the light will be more even,

f11_1-500_shutter_spider.jpg
by kenskid

Comment:
Its great that you are taking in to account the tips from dpc, looking at this picture i wouldnt use a flash or if you did use a flast, cover it with something to make it less and more even, i usually use a pic computer paper, folded as many times as i need to make it less, you could back up a bit and use your MP's and crop in that would make the focus better and the light more even,

Nostalgia
by L1

Comment:
Wow. this is a great shot, i love the DOF, and i am a huge baseball fan, really great job.

"Caught a branch"
by philup

Comment:
*Critique Club*

Color: the color in your photograph is good i really like the blues and green mixed with the bokah, the brown and white on the branch gives it texture,

Composition: I think that you centered this photo well, and if that is really fishing string, this is a good macro, because that fishing string looks thick, whoever it was must be trying to catch a whale,

DOF: DOF is great, i love the bokah, some people are bokah and some arent, its the tast of the photographer. great texture on the branch and the fishing string,

Levels: The levels are good, seems to be even throughout the picture, its not over or underexposed, good,

Overall: I think you went creative with this photo, which is good, the problem with dpc is that its hard to show what you are trying to capture to the community, overall i like your photograph,
good job, and keep shooting,

Judicial Branch - U.S. Supreme Court
by modurn

Comment:
*Critique Club*

Composition: I think the picture is centered well, but you could have gotten a different angle, maybe you did on your out takes, the pillars and the stairs are straight, thats good,

Color: the leves seem to be a little dark, and the right top of the building is a little blow out.

Detail: Great detail i can see the figures and read the writing on the building

My opinion: I think this is a good branch idea, part of the three branches of goverment we adhere to, it could have been a bit brighter, what would have been really cool is if you did it when the shaddows of the pillars were showing to the left or the right, over all this is a good shot,
keep shooting

Country Branch
by jsas

Comment:
*Critique Club*

The DOF looks good except in the lower part of the photo under the fence posts, its out of focus,

The tree is a little dark, it looks like you upped the greens in post processing, I can see inbeetween the tree branches and around the edges of the tree the sky is a different color then the rest of the sky, in result you have a bit of a glow around the tree

The corn field looks good, the grown over road is a good addition to this picture

Overall i think this is a great picture, next time, when you post proccess, zoom in and use a smaller circle to get in those hard spots,but remember the basic editing rules for the challenge, for personal use it would be good, also, a border around the photo would be great,

Good job, keep on shooting,

Message edited by author 2005-09-18 12:55:58.