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| 03/20/2003 05:08:35 AM |
With Flavourby Pep VentosaComment: A little underexposed for my tastes. I like the framing and the idea of the lighting, it just needs a little more. The colors came out really well. Good luck |
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| 03/17/2003 05:23:09 AM |
Asiaby lionelmComment: I like this. Simple is good. THe only thing I'd suggest is to take the picture from slightly further up. I believe the angle would still maintain your reflections and it will put a little more of the dish and sticks in the frame. It would also add just a hint more color to this and I think it needs a little more color. Pretty good shot. |
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| 03/17/2003 05:19:58 AM |
Bouquetby AleciaComment: Great colors. I like the idea a lot. I think it might be just a teeny bit underexposed on the utensils though. On the whole it is very well executed. |
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| 03/16/2003 11:06:31 AM |
"Island Walk"by sfarrell23Comment: Great composition. Nice framing. A little clearer and this would really be an outstanding pic. |
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| 03/16/2003 09:41:44 AM |
Night Traffic on the John A. Roebling Bridgeby RLSComment: Postcard shot, all the way. This is definitely one of the most well composed photos of this challenge. Just a pinch soft on the focus probably due to the longer exposure time. Great shot |
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| 03/16/2003 09:40:03 AM |
Solemnby AnastasiaComment: The sky is too bright. Everything else is really picturesque. Great shot |
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| 03/16/2003 09:06:36 AM |
Boston Bridgeby mvilborgComment: This bridge is too camoflauged into the cityscape. Its very difficult to see with this lighting. |
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| 03/16/2003 09:04:24 AM |
I Walked Hereby greenem2Comment: The tree in the upper right is a serious distraction for me when I look at this pic. Nice bridge, well framed and shot. I would've considered doing this in color, since there seems to be quite a few trees with leaves and open water. |
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| 03/16/2003 09:02:25 AM |
The Royal Gorgeby vtruanComment: This is a gorgeous scene and a cool bridge. The color of the snow though is neon blue and that is not helping. The shot looks sort of grainy as well. Not grainy like a high ISO grainy, but like a very large picture was made very small. or maybe one too many sharpens. I'm not sure, but it doesn't look "right" Awesome scene though that is definitely worth photographing |
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| 03/16/2003 09:00:03 AM |
Fried Egg on a PLate.....without the plateby RoseytoneComment: Greetings from the Critique Club
By Inspzil
Composition - Good background for this subject. The color is good, but might've been a little better a bit darker. It serves as a contrast to the subject which appears to be a fried egg that is very, very well done (in cooking terms). In terms of composition, I think the part about being very well done is not helping your cause. It makes it a bit more intriguing, but its no help. I think the string is definitely a creative touch. I'm not sure if its helping the picture though. I really think thats sort of a matter of opinion to each viewer. I think the egg is framed a little too much to the right. The biggest problem with this composition is that it really isn't grabbing the viewer. I think you did a good job picking the background, but it needs something else to sort of accessorize the egg part. Maybe a fork or something might've worked. I gotta move on though
Technical - Pretty well taken in the grand scheme of things. There are 2 technical things that are bothering me. First - The subject seems to have an awful lot of light bouncing off it. It makes it really seem a lot like plastic more than egg. Second - The background looks like its pixelating a little. Every other time I look at it it seems ok. But in between I think it looks like its pixelating. Maybe its just me. If you would've exposed this a little less, I think you'd have eliminated some of the reflections on the egg and also made the background a bit darker.
Overall - I think this shot was worthy of a little better score than it got. I think it definitely meets the challenge. There are a few things you could've done though to make this particular composition a little better in terms of lighting, exposure, and framing. The composition itself though has a limit to how much these aspects can affect the score positively. Hope this could be of at least some help to you. Good luck in future challenges. - Inspzil |
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