Crevasse
by Jutilda

Comment:
Nice one Judy. Good lighting and sharp focus. Continue great with the great scores..WPL2 is just around the corner.

park tryst
by blackenedwhite

Comment:
Greetings from your own critique club.

First Impression
Nice shot.
Composition:
Good Composition.
Subject:
Nice, meets the challenge
Technical (Colour and light):
The focus is very soft on the faces. I don't know if it's over done in proceesing or not. Not sure if you use NI to reduce noise. But the focus in not there quite right on the faces.
Improvement:
Focus.
Summary:
Nice over all image lacking the proper focus or processing is over done.

Cheers!! Keep shooting.

Ninja Lenscaps from Canon
by blackenedwhite

Comment:
Greetings from your own critique club. Sorry, I was off the hook for a while.

First Impression
Like the idea, don't like the execution.
Composition:
Composition is alright.
Subject:
Fits the challenge.
Technical (Colour and light):
Don't think the border really goes with the picture. The lights on the lemon is blown out. When I look at the picture, my eyes first goes on the bright yellow border and then goes to the blown out area on the lemon.
Improvement:
Border and blown out as mentioned above.
Summary:
Not one of your great shot technically.

Cheers!! Keep shooting.

Desvasidized
by blackenedwhite

Comment:
Greetings from your own critique club. Sorry, I was off the hook for a while.

First Impression
Very Nice strong image.
Composition:
Good Composition.
Subject:
Very nice.
Technical (Colour and light):
Very nice. I really like the sharpness, it makes the image even stonger.
Improvement:
More details on the hair and BG, but I don't think it was possible because it was Single Light Source challenge.
Summary:
Very nice strong image. Looks more like the shot from one of my favorite photographer on DPC - "Librodo"

Congratulations on your Personal Best. Keep shooting.

Message edited by author 2006-06-16 13:59:52.

Flirt
by Rebecca

Comment:
Greetings from your own critique club.

First Impression
Very Nice shot with WOW factor.
Composition:
Perfect.
Subject:
Very nice, perfect for the challenge.
Technical (Colour and light):
Very nice ligting. Just wondering how it will look with more color saturation, particularly the green color.
Improvement:
More saturation for green color.
Summary:
Nice image with WOW factor. Nice composition, lighting and focus is spot on.

Congratulations. Keep shooting.

St. James arriving to the temple
by alexgarcia

Comment:
Greetings from your own critique club.

First Impression
Nice shot.
Composition:
Nice angle shot. I don't know if it was possible to include more of the statues.
Subject:
Very nice, fits the challenge
Technical (Colour and light):
I reallt like the duotone effect and lighting is perfect.
Improvement:
If it was possible to show more of the statues.
Summary:
Nice over picture meeting the challange.

Keep shooting.

Daddy and son visiting London
by alexgarcia

Comment:
Greetings from your own critique club.

First Impression
Nice shot with very good DOF.
Composition:
Good Composition. The "son" is cut. Don't know if it was possible to keep complete round of both lense caps.
Subject:
It was very tricky challenge. I actually could not think of any idea for this one. So nice take on the challenge.
Technical (Colour and light):
Good DOF and colors. I would prefer more lights on the BG, particularly to bring out the beautiful building.
Improvement:
More lights on the BG and full lense caps.
Summary:
Nice over all shot, and deserves better score than what it got.

Cheers!! Keep shooting.

Dawn
by alexgarcia

Comment:
Greetings from your own critique club.

First Impression
Very Nice and sharp shot.
Composition:
Good Composition.
Subject:
Very nice, fits the challenge
Technical (Colour and light):
Colors are very nice. As far as ligting is concern, I don't like dark foreground. I think dodging would have helped to bring out some details. The buildig it self and sky lighting is just perfect.
Improvement:
Details in the front.
Summary:
Very nice picture over all.

Cheers!! Keep shooting.

Here comes the sun
by alexgarcia

Comment:
Greetings from your own critique club.

First Impression
Very Nice Sunrise shot.
Composition:
Nice composition. I like the horizon following rule of third.
Subject:
Nice choice of subject for the challenge. If I am not wrong there are other couple of entriies with the same theme.
Technical (Colour and light):
Colors and light is perfect for this one.
Improvement:
The hallo around the Sun and the on the edge of the building needs to be avoided. Don't know if the hallo is due to PP or it was there in the original.
Summary:
Nice sunrise picture, would have scores high with just little improvement.

Cheers!! Keep shooting.

Beauty between green
by alexgarcia

Comment:
Greetings from your own critique club. Sorry, I was off the hook for a while.

First Impression
Nice shot, may not meeting the challenge. Particularly there are so many DNMC police around in DPC. LOL
Composition:
Did not like tree in the forgraound. OOF foreground tree is still fine, but don't like the focused branched on the face.
Subject:
There is lots green in picture, but the sunlight on the face with high contrast leads eye there.
Technical (Colour and light):
Good DOF, colors. I think there is too much light on face compare to foreground and BG.
Improvement:
Less light on face, more light on the green trees.
Summary:
Not one of your best shot, I firmly believe you can do better than this.

Cheers!! Keep shooting.