Through diaphanous wing
by strangeghost

Comment:
WOW, this is cool John, Congrates on another Blue. One of the very few 10 I gave in this challenge.

Message edited by author 2006-07-03 00:31:22.

S | U | S | P | E | N | S | I | O | N
by Keith Maniac

Comment:
This is really nice Keith. Only one thing to be picky is the bright sun.

the Agony of Defeat
by margiemu

Comment:
Greetings from your own critique club.

First Impression
Very Nice emotive shot. Reading your comments, looks like she has better career in acting.
Composition:
Just perfect.
Subject:
Nice take on the challenge.
Technical (Colour and light):
The color and lighting are spot on. B&W is the perfect choice.
Improvement:
Nothing much really. If I have to be picky, I would say she is looking outside the frame. At least one of these object in the left side like letter, flower or ring would have made it a story.
Summary:
Very nice emotive image, perfect for the challenge.

Congrates on your Personal Best and top 20(almost top 10). Cheers!!!

Engrossed
by margiemu

Comment:
Greetings from your own critique club.

First Impression
Very Nice shot.
Composition:
Composition is alright. May be a tighter crop would have worked better.
Subject:
Meets the challenge.
Technical (Colour and light):
The color and lighting is wonderful.
Improvement:
Little bit tighter crop
Summary:
Nice over all picture, brings back the memories of chidhood.

Congratualtions on nice capture, cheers!!

Left Behind
by margiemu

Comment:
Greetings from your own critique club.

First Impression
Nice shot, but common subject.
Composition:
I would like to see the doll in the far most corner. That will give a feeling of left behind. Here doll is very close. But I assume you wanted to use the natural light from window. May be a different time of the day when the light is in the upper left corner...
Subject:
Common subject for this kind of challenge, but nicely executed.
Technical (Colour and light):
Lighting is perfect. Natural lights adds more to this kind if shot. I really like the BW / Duotome effect.
Improvement:
Composition
Summary:
Nice over all picture with good exposure and focus.

Congratualtions.

Retake on Window Framed
by margiemu

Comment:
Greetings from your own critique club.

First Impression
Colors add little more to this comapre to the original.
Composition:
Height is just 393 pixels. I would like to see more height.
Subject:
Improvement over the origianl in terms of colors and interesting coulds. But the composition is almost smae. I don't know if there were any comments on the original about the height.
Technical (Colour and light):
The color and lighting okay.
Improvement:
Different composition which allows more height.
Summary:
Just notices the take two is almost same score as the original.

Keep Shooting, Cheers!!!

Walk in the Woods
by margiemu

Comment:
Greetings from your own critique club.

First Impression
Very Nice shot, with WOW factor.
Composition:
Very good composition. Just wondering if it would have looked even better with camera even lower on the ground.
Subject:
I really like the subject. Very nice green rein forest colors. Just Wonderful
Technical (Colour and light):
Great colors and lighting with perfect exposure.
Improvement:
Nothing but just one thing. Shot from little lower almost on the road without any tripod.
Summary:
Nice over all picture. I really liked it and firmly believe it deserves better than what it got.

Congrates on very nice image. Keep shooting...Cheers!!

tag.... you're it!
by margiemu

Comment:
Greetings from your own critique club.

First Impression
Nice cute shot.
Composition:
Composition is okay, but for this particular challenge you can exclude the faces of the kids. But the expression and kids are so cute, you tempt to include in the frame. For the shadow challenge, you could have done different crop witout the faces.
Subject:
I really like the subject. Nice take on the challenge.
Technical (Colour and light):
The color and lighting in the front is perfect.
Improvement:
Different crop.
Summary:
Nice over all image, with cute kids.

Cheers!!

Ahhh....
by margiemu

Comment:
Greetings from your own critique club. Sorry for not being able to comment for a while on your entries.

First Impression
Good take on challenge, with okay execution.
Composition:
Did not like the panaromic view. Looks too small for DPC. Also, I didn't like too much bubles.
Subject:
Like the subject, meets the challenge.
Technical (Colour and light):
The color and lighting in the front is okay.
Improvement:
Regular corp instead panaromic. Less bubles, may be tripod little bit higer.
Summary:
Good idea, with regualr corp and different angle would have scored more.

Cheers!!

Moonlight Serenade
by alfresco

Comment:
All I can say is WOW. What a wonderful shot!!!!!! I would agree with dsa157.

Message edited by author 2006-06-23 17:46:37.