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| 08/11/2003 10:11:32 PM |
Just beyond the screen doorby joannadivaComment: While I'm no cat lover, this has a lot of merit. The downside for me is the somewhat cluttered background. Just a thought... Had you considered cropping the right side closer? I looked at it cropped to the edge of the 'bed' the cat is on and to my eye it improved the photo quite a bit...
But that's just me :) |
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| 08/11/2003 10:07:32 PM |
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| 08/10/2003 01:45:01 PM |
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| 08/10/2003 01:40:18 PM |
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| 08/06/2003 08:51:29 AM |
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| 08/05/2003 03:57:55 PM |
bountyby medic391Comment: Nice concept... You may want to look for better lighting sources though... Also, the table doesn't add to the shot and should be cropped out :) |
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| 08/05/2003 03:52:36 PM |
....in the beginningby StewanComment: Interesting concept for the challenge... However, I feel your execution missed on a couple of points...
The table to the right and below the Bible adds nothing... Crop it out :)
If you could have found a better light source that would give an even illumination it would have been a big help too... To see what I mean, look at Chapter 2, Verse 23 and compare the readability to Chapter 3, Verse 3... The light on 3:3 is much harsher and makes it more difficult to see... To be "a light unto the world", you will need to master lighting a little better :)
The focus on parts of the apple are off... I feel this could have been a MUCH better shot if it had been much closer in and only had the bitten part of the apple...
Last, but certainly not least, the Bible should (in my opinion) be straight... It is severely slanted here...
Great concept though... Nice interpretation of the challenge. |
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| 08/05/2003 03:39:18 PM |
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| 08/05/2003 03:36:58 PM |
Love is like flowers in the gardenby GeorgesBogaertComment: You're not suppose to have a flower as the subject of your shot :) Just kidding :)
Seriously, I am bothered by the angle... I think you would have had a better shot if the shadows were straighter and maybe if possible, if the bottom could have been closer to the feet.... I think portrait layout would have suited this best.
But that's just me :) |
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| 08/05/2003 03:31:52 PM |
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