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08/05/2003 07:24:51 PM |
| Interesting juxtaposition |
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08/05/2003 03:52:36 PM |
Interesting concept for the challenge... However, I feel your execution missed on a couple of points...
The table to the right and below the Bible adds nothing... Crop it out :)
If you could have found a better light source that would give an even illumination it would have been a big help too... To see what I mean, look at Chapter 2, Verse 23 and compare the readability to Chapter 3, Verse 3... The light on 3:3 is much harsher and makes it more difficult to see... To be "a light unto the world", you will need to master lighting a little better :)
The focus on parts of the apple are off... I feel this could have been a MUCH better shot if it had been much closer in and only had the bitten part of the apple...
Last, but certainly not least, the Bible should (in my opinion) be straight... It is severely slanted here...
Great concept though... Nice interpretation of the challenge. |
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08/04/2003 01:42:04 PM |
| Interesting take on the challenge, nicely composed photo. |
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08/03/2003 04:20:59 AM |
| I knew I'd see this sometime! Lighting could be better - the flash is a real pain in the apple. Viewpoint is a bit dull, perhaps improved by coming lower down closer to the page and using less of the apple (macro?). [4] |
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08/02/2003 08:19:25 PM |
| nice idea, but the composition and lighting seem a bit too ordinary. Try experimenting with shadows and different angles. |
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08/02/2003 01:12:45 PM |
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08/01/2003 09:59:40 PM |
| Good idea, but the flashlight hurts the picture with its reflection |
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08/01/2003 05:49:04 PM |
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08/01/2003 02:42:47 PM |
| I absolutely love your creativity here. Well done |
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07/31/2003 02:26:04 PM |
| Flash did you a bit of harm.. Thought right on. |
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07/31/2003 01:10:02 PM |
| I like the thought and staging a lot. Greater depth of field to render both the apple and the text sharply would have been a plus. |
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07/31/2003 12:00:15 PM |
| good idea.. poor execution.. flash from camera too harsh? |
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07/30/2003 09:26:41 PM |
| brill - if only the apple was pin sharp |
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07/30/2003 08:53:27 PM |
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07/30/2003 05:51:30 PM |
| Very original idea, lighting looks to be from an on camera flash(corners are a little dark), probably would have helped to have more ambiant light. 7 |
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07/30/2003 09:31:26 AM |
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07/30/2003 01:07:12 AM |
| I think this is a fantastic idea. I woul have set the pages on some foliage to give the effect of actually being there. Again, it was a really good idea with a lot of potential. |
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07/30/2003 12:23:25 AM |
| really good idea... light is too harsh... did you use a flash? |
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