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| 04/25/2005 07:39:39 PM |
Voicesby DannyMComment: I guess I went with the crowd on this, I voted 5. Like some of your other commentors, I felt it left me rather flat, although I enjoyed what I felt you were trying to say.
I like your composition, and I guess the busy background is a part of the message. I do think that a way is needed to focus attention the subject. The light is also very diffuse, so the image lacks depth. There are two things possible in post that IMO improve it:
- Quick mask to decrease BG exposure and increase subject exposure
- Increased contrast & tweaked curves to warm it a bit and give it some depth
Although the messages crowding the background are an integral part of the photo's composition, they could be de-emphasized a little without detracting. I'm wondering how shooting this at a wide aperture, say f/2.8, to just barely throw the BG out of perfectly sharp focus would have done to increase the focus on the subject?
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| 04/24/2005 09:16:07 PM |
Spaceby marboComment: Infrared? How long did she have to stand still?? |
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| 04/24/2005 09:13:56 PM |
Alone with my thoughts...by samtrundleComment: The lighting here is beautiful. Hard enough to make it dramatic, soft enough to eliminate very harsh shadows. The negative space works well. |
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| 04/24/2005 09:12:28 PM |
Race startby GordonComment: Wow, this would have kicked butt in "Extreme Action"! Nice catch! One of my favorites of the challenge. |
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| 04/24/2005 09:00:53 PM |
Reflecting...by LevTComment: I really like the use of selective desaturation on this, one of the very few that it really works for. I also like the range of tones in the face. |
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| 04/24/2005 08:59:03 PM |
Breeze by PhilosComment: A very nice job with the color and composition. I'd prefer a little less sharpening. |
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| 04/18/2005 07:32:43 PM |
Baywatchby LevTComment: Lord, what beautiful... separation of subject and background! |
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| 04/04/2005 12:01:54 AM |
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| 04/03/2005 04:01:43 PM |
Forgottenby FalcComment: Tons of mood. Like the blue cast. Would have liked a bit more contrast. |
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| 04/03/2005 04:00:30 PM |
Lux Eternae by RgarciaComment: What outstanding light. I very much like the choice of composition, don't know if I'm too much on the "glow" around the headstone... perhaps done a litte less strongly? |
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