Delirious Puppet Crew
by aznym

Comment:
One of my ribbon picks (I like everything about this except the font for the band's title -- clever picture is just icing on the cake) I can see this as an album cover. Well done

the Dill Pickle Club
by jjbeguin

Comment:
One of my ribbon picks -- you got this just right (composition, b&w, title, text) well done.

Chocolate Attraction
by melismatica

Comment:
Hi Melissa:

Greeting from the Critique Club -- hello to a fellow member -- the pressure's on me to offer as good a critique as you do :)

It seems by the few comments that you've fallen into the "average score" category here. You meet the challenge and there is a good technical quality to your shot.

What strikes me first about your shot is that each element has a different color and there is no unifying element or main element to pull the composition together - it's as if each (the chocolate, strawberry, background, wings, bug body, and leaves) all take the same weight in the shot and in a way compete for my attention.

Compositionally, you have only one two items but they are bundled so tightly together that the composition doesn't allow me to explore the frame.

If you have any questions or comments, please pm me. I've enjoyed looking at your photographs and wish you lots of good shooting!

Regards,
Theresa

Jalapeño project
by redmondson01

Comment:
excellent lighting - really becomes an element in this fine shot. One of my top picks this challenge -- good luck

The Beautiful Side of Desktop Clutter
by C-town driver

Comment:
very clever == one of my top picks this challenge, you've laid out enough items to give the sense of clutter w/o the actual clutter which would have ruined the composition - eye glass/photo is unique (if you invented this -- be prepared for many to copy it as it's quite fun)

The Tree
by Maverick

Comment:
your eye for setting the stage shows on this fine shot -- fog sets all but the tree into the background, sepia-like tone matches the mood well. One of my ribbon picks this challenge -- good luck :)

White Picket Fence
by digitaldave

Comment:
really tell a good story here - I like the B&W and the strong composition, one of my ribbon picks this challenge - good luck

Notepad Leaves
by arpita

Comment:
you've got the wow factor here -- very well lit - sure to be one of my favorites. (the white border detracts - sorry to say) One of my ribbon picks this challenge - best of luck

Twice a day, everyday!
by smokeditor

Comment:
best toothbrush shot of the bunch - excellent lighting and use of color to highlight the brush, like the dof and composition

A Remote Island
by 3DsArcher

Comment:
very clever title -- the splash makes the shot, good dof, main subjects blend into the rock so the shot lacks a strong focal point for me.