Its not very clear from the photo what you were trying to show and I need to read the title to understand anything about it ( and relate how it meets the challenge ).
The glare on the subject is distracting. IMO the presentation is neither attractive nor intriguing...
I know I have criticized you a lot but this is my most honest opinion...
At my screen it looks a lot brighter, you might like to play with curves a little and saturate the green a bit to add contrast. |