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12/18/2011 06:39:19 PM |
I have a really odd comment. I think it would very hard to release the arrow with your fingers wrapped so far around the bow string.
I am a little curious about the expression as well. If this were a paint gun or something, one could imagine a "gotcha :-)" face. This arrow, while a target arrow, could just as easily be a leathal weapon.
To be honest, I didn't notice the yellow until I read the comments.
In any case, I still love all your work. |
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12/16/2011 08:21:55 AM |
I didn't notice the yellow marking at first, but yea, that's pretty bold; an easy clone fix though. The first thing that actually caught my eye was the grain on her skin (arm, chest, etc). Another thing is the tip of the arrow is hidden behind the blade of grass. Also, for some reason I find the foreground hand a bit comical. It's got a bit of distortion on it and looks tiny compared to her other hand. Oh, and there's some sharpening halo at the top right. I sure am picky at 5:30am! :)
I like the composition, pose, and expression. I also like the face being framed within the bow. |
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12/16/2011 06:28:19 AM |
| I like this one, wonderful composition. Imho, there are 2 that I find need attention. The expression is best in serious look or angry. The yellow marking at lower bow string a bit too bright and distracts. |
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