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Kitchen Pantry Reshoot
Kitchen Pantry Reshoot
sjhuls


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Camera: Canon EOS-400D Rebel XTi
Lens: Canon EF 50mm f/1.8 II
Date: Jan 11, 2011
Aperture: 9
ISO: 400
Date Uploaded: Jan 11, 2011

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Comments: 7
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 So I had the drawer still sitting here, and after the bits and pieces challenge was over I decided to take some suggestions from the comments I received and re shoot this.

I the best comment I received was from lydiaToo She said it looked too flash photography. So I still used my flash but I softened it a bit again with baby wipes. (I plan on getting or making a soft box soon)

I liked the results much better. I didn't edit as much as my challenge entry but I didn't need to. I also changed the border. I wanted to go with a darker border for the challenge but thought it might look like I was trying to add to the photo instead of just framing it.

Here is my challenge entry:


So what do you think did I do better?

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 01/15/2011 07:47:56 PM
I like the deep rich coloring of this one. Great photo!
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 01/12/2011 03:13:10 PM
I'd rather this version. Nice.
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 01/12/2011 08:14:56 AM
I like the portrait orientation. Looks like a kitchen poster. :)
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 01/12/2011 07:48:11 AM
Yes, it's better for sure!
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 01/12/2011 04:38:49 AM
The vertical format works better because it matches the boxes - and the pulses are better too - I wouldn't have been sharp enough to identify the flash problem - but I think she was right.
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 01/12/2011 01:24:52 AM
I think this is improved in every way you've changed it. (I'm not criticizing your entry.) I like the vertical presentation, the colour has more impact, and I prefer the inclusion of more of the outer boxes. The dark border suits it better too.
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 01/11/2011 10:17:53 PM
I like this one better than the challenge entry. There's more depth to the color. It's probably just an optical illusion, but the lines in the dividers appear to curve toward the right.
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