Not voting but... I wish the escapee were farther back, into the scene more... so some blue would be at its head... it blends to much for my taste as is. But... wow ! What a brilliant idea!
I absolutely love your idea. I think the image doesn't work for me because the butterfly blends in to what's behind him. If you shot this from a much lower angle, so that the butterfly's profile broke the horizon line, I think it might emphasize more the rise and escape.