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10/02/2005 06:13:13 AM |
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07/28/2004 05:23:10 PM |
Thanks everyone.
Didn't expect 11th place, so I am pleased about that! The comments have been really helpful - yet again. Some wonderful suggestions and ideas have been made for possible improvements to the photo - they all help me to see it in a different way, broadening my perspective and my mind. Seeing other's photos and reading the threads also help enormously, but particularly seeing other's photos. There's some really creative photography on the site. Hoping to pick some 'favourites' out soon. |
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07/28/2004 12:24:15 AM |
Congratulations on your 11th placing. This is almost abstract vision of white chocolate. Happy for you. |
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07/27/2004 03:26:14 PM |
Nice use of lighting, rythm, pattern. Well done. |
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07/27/2004 01:56:28 PM |
great abstract...crop off the top, and it's near perfect! |
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07/27/2004 02:08:22 AM |
One of my top two. Alot of the shots seem to have the WB off one way or another, but this one is on. Love the DOF and focus that draws your eyes to the middle and then back frther into the pic. A few "hot spots" noted, but maybe diffusing the light just a touch more. Still excellent!! |
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07/26/2004 01:30:53 PM |
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07/26/2004 11:03:25 AM |
Almost looks like a keyboard. :) Nice DOF. |
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07/26/2004 12:42:24 AM |
very nice composition, good DOF. |
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07/25/2004 09:29:44 AM |
Nice high key. For the challenge, I would rather see this done in traditional brown chocolate, but did not score down for your choice...
TC |
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07/24/2004 02:42:35 PM |
Very nice! Very abstract! |
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07/24/2004 02:37:11 PM |
needs more depth of field |
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07/24/2004 03:37:59 AM |
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07/23/2004 03:12:29 PM |
Quite well executed and nice colours. |
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07/23/2004 06:15:20 AM |
In my opinion, cropping more on the top you might have the sensation of a neverending chocolate surface, |
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07/23/2004 01:53:36 AM |
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07/22/2004 10:06:34 PM |
Great use of shadows. White chocolate is my fav! |
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07/22/2004 10:55:29 AM |
Don't let me see the background, I don't want the foreground to end!!!
awesome picture |
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07/22/2004 12:27:53 AM |
i like the pattern... it's soft and geometrical... a9 |
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07/21/2004 11:50:37 PM |
Artistic and well shot.
Dof is right for this, as is the lighting.
One of my favorites in this challenge!
A well-deserved ((9)) |
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07/21/2004 06:59:52 PM |
I would say that this is a very well composed abstract. My favourite abstracts are the ones where the subject appears to be something completely different then what it actually is due to the angle and composition of the image. This looks like a keyboard or something! Well taken. DOF is good, as is exposure - you could have very easily over-exposed the image! 8 |
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07/21/2004 04:24:23 PM |
Beautiful use of shallow DOF and subtle lighting. Pale blue background works well. Low viewpoint makes this an almost architectural abstract. Nice job! |
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07/21/2004 03:30:22 AM |
crop off bottom third, keeps it flat, good subject. like it |
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07/21/2004 02:02:20 AM |
I'm hungry now :) I like the photo, but I'm not sure about this border. 8. |
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07/21/2004 01:19:52 AM |
I love the angle and focus. The lighting seems a little flat. |
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07/21/2004 01:00:29 AM |
I like the close-up, choice of angle, and depth of field used. Using milk chocolate has made it stand out too. It certainly has an interesting abstract quality to it given the squares, lines, and textures also. A little noise in the blue background but not overly distracting. |
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