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07/30/2004 04:30:44 AM |
Hello Adine from the Critque Club
First of all Congratulations on your placing with this image
I just love the blue bottle and it is very nicely done but for my own preference I do not like the brown bottle it has little interest maybe a green one would look better but thats just being very picky
The blue bottle almost looks like its been painted onto a canvas and could almost give the same impact without the smaller bottle
I am not very technical but I can see this is good and very nicely done
Maybe the white background is a little stark or harsh Dark blue maybe would look nice
But other than that I dont really feel I can add a lot more Nice idea well taken
Just keep on enjoying your photography and enjoy D P C I find it very addictive!
I hope my comments although very limited help
If you have any questions feel free to P M me
Regards
Sally |
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07/25/2004 08:42:51 PM |
| Very cool shot...my best vote yet! |
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07/25/2004 09:14:50 AM |
| I like this one - However the center of balance seems shifted to the right, making it feen actually unbalanced. I wonder if that was deliberate or whether it might be more effective croppec closer on the left and wider on the right. you would lose some of the reflection but I'm not sure that is critical to the image, it serves as a leading line that leads out, off the frame. Usually we want leading lines to lead into the image so the viewer will look at it longer. |
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07/22/2004 11:10:54 AM |
| LOve this shot. Even more so i love the blue bottle .. will you ship it to me. |
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07/22/2004 07:48:39 AM |
| Really cool image. Somehow the bottles almost gain "personalities" due to the way you set them up. It reminds me of old cartoons where little guys easily pick up great big bad guys. There's something delightfully quirky about the image. I think a little more white space too the right may have helped just a bit to add a bit more quirkyness. |
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07/22/2004 06:29:51 AM |
| Nice colors, nice balance but not enough in it to keep the viewer intrigued. |
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07/21/2004 02:04:58 AM |
| Beautiful in its simplicity and form. Your use of colors and negative space really emphasize the subject here. I give and 8 |
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07/19/2004 08:50:23 PM |
| Great coloring, light and focus. I hope this does well for you! Good luck. |
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07/19/2004 10:41:33 AM |
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07/19/2004 09:51:12 AM |
Simple and very effective.
Good work |
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07/19/2004 01:26:12 AM |
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07/19/2004 12:36:38 AM |
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