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As the clouds of war gather once more: We WILL remember them
As the clouds of war gather once more: We WILL remember them
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Photograph Information Photographer's Comments
Challenge: Photojournalism (Classic Editing)
Camera: Fujifilm FinePix A202
Location: Perth Western Australia
Date: Nov 21, 2002
Aperture: 1:4.6
ISO: 100
Shutter: 1/110 sec
Galleries: Military
Date Uploaded: Nov 21, 2002

 State War Memorial, Kings Park, Perth WA.
To all those who have given their lives in war;
They shall grow not old, as we that are left grow old:
Age shall not weary them, nor the years condemn.
At the going down of the sun and in the morning
We will remember them.

- Ode to Rememberance

Statistics
Place: 82 out of 147
Avg (all users): 5.1502
Avg (commenters): 5.4118
Avg (participants): 5.0000
Avg (non-participants): 5.2470
Views since voting: 1302
Votes: 273
Comments: 18
Favorites: 0

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 12/02/2002 03:47:00 AM
Well, an average of 5.159, getting better. Thanks for your comments, i have taken the suggestions onboard.
 Comments Made During the Challenge
12/01/2002 02:11:00 PM
You seem to have 2 subject here, the penacle and the eternal flame. The flame being in front appears to be your choice of subjects. But the people take your eyes to the penacle. I find myself going from one to the other, back and forth. I get the sense of a struggle for top dog in the photo. Maybe someone else feels this way too and can explain it better. Don't get me wrong it's a good photo otherwise. Maybe taken from another angle, one which eliminates the people. Just my thoughts PTL5
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 12/01/2002 06:20:00 AM
The tour group in the back is a nice touch. DPz
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 11/30/2002 05:27:00 PM
It's okay... but the shot just doesn't do too much for me here. Seems to be too balanced and two dimensional.
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 11/30/2002 01:53:00 PM
Shame the railing blocks off parts of the quotation.
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 11/27/2002 09:03:00 PM
could you maybe have crept up to the fencing and taken the picture without its bars blocking the words? so that the rectangle started with the L in LET and ended with the G in OFFERING, you know? heck i bet you paced it out and lined it up just so, should trust your judgement, could no more have uprooted the bars than you could've moved the clouds away for a sunnier landscape. then again overcast might be where it's at for this contemplative picture. seven.
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 11/27/2002 02:17:00 PM
Nice crop
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 11/27/2002 12:16:00 PM
One step to the left would have made this a whole point better for me. I think a polarizer would have helped to. While I'm sure the kids were out of your control, catching them in a more reverent moment would have improved the mood. 6 nards656
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 11/26/2002 01:26:00 PM
Composition ~ It may be an illusion, but the horizon seems slanted to the right a bit. Also the railing is distracting (both the front rail blocking the words and the back rail cutting the people). I know this will sound off the wall, but if you could have raised your camera 1 meter (about 3 feet) higher in the air and aimed down, this would have gone from a very nice snapshot to a powerful image (in my opinion). Possibly as little as holding your camera an arms length above your head and shotting. It takes a bit of practice to frame the shot that way, but it can really be worth it. I love the school children 'touring' in the background... You caught them at a perfect moment... ~ Exposure ~ I like the light overcast days produce and this shot took full advantage of it. Well done... ~ Focus ~ Well done... ~ Challenge ~ I have no problem imagining this in a publication... Well done! ~ Myqyl ~
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 11/26/2002 10:14:00 AM
The tour going on in the background spoils it.
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 11/26/2002 03:59:00 AM
Got to get rid of that railing. To distracting. Plus need to get down on the ground and try this shot to really get a great eye catcher.
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 11/26/2002 12:00:00 AM
Meets the challenge, and makes a good picture. Grayce
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 11/25/2002 09:14:00 PM
I suppose you didnt have a telephoto lens. It would have brought the sphere closer to the flame. Nice and crip photo though!
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 11/25/2002 08:08:00 PM
And we connot that freedom from fear requires sacrifice. WWll JEM
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 11/25/2002 06:29:00 PM
you have to look hard for the kids, would have preferred them right up
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 11/25/2002 06:11:00 PM
Nice composition here. Where is this? Neat shot. Justine
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 11/25/2002 02:13:00 AM
Needs emotion from a person interacting with the scene
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 11/25/2002 12:39:00 AM
Excellent journalistic type shot! Though it's not the most fabulous photograph, for photojournalism it works very well. I'm giving it a 8! Good job.
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