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07/04/2004 02:52:46 PM |
Lighting: Well lit, but seems a tiny bit over-exposed. There are a few places in the hat that have lost detail.
Pose: Wonderful, my only suggestion would be to have her look up a bit more.
Background: Works well with the model and outfit, but could have been a bit further back to diminish the shadow. |
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07/03/2004 02:22:04 PM |
| Very cute pose. Some of the lighter tones seem a bit "flattened" and maybe reddened, but that could also be my monitor or my eyes (I typically have trouble with red tones). |
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07/02/2004 07:53:48 PM |
| flash is a little harsh on the face. It's a tad noisy too. |
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07/02/2004 12:13:18 PM |
| Very nicely composed; would like a bit more sharpness in her expressive eyes. :o) |
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07/02/2004 06:36:30 AM |
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07/01/2004 07:25:40 PM |
| Beautiful child, excellent portrait and color. Would have been better without lipstick though. |
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07/01/2004 07:26:01 AM |
| very pretty colors ...would have liked to have seen a sharper focus on the model's face. Found my eye drawn to the hat which to me seems to have the sharper focus |
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07/01/2004 01:59:01 AM |
| And she is! Wonderful expression and pose of model, choice of hat and dress combined with high-key tonality very good. Lighting is too strong and I also don't like the shadow picture right (girl's left), which shows some noise. |
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06/30/2004 10:37:10 PM |
| What a cutie pie. Maybe place your model further away from the backdrop to avoid the hard shadows. Still a veyr effective cute pic. |
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06/30/2004 04:04:40 AM |
| Very cute pose, but the face seems a bit blown out, the eyes have too soft a focus, and there's that nasty shadow behind her... |
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06/30/2004 01:38:41 AM |
| She's a sweetheart in a nicely constructed studio. Good pose. Focus not quite as sharp as I'd like to see on the eyes. |
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06/30/2004 01:38:18 AM |
Very cute! Love the look in her eyes! Nicely composed. The lighting here doesn't do her justice though. Your colors are a little dull which to me means ya need more light. She also looks a little flat. Try movin' the lights around to the side a little more. You did get the catch light in the eyes spot on. Keep tryin' and post 'em so I can see!
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06/29/2004 11:54:48 PM |
nice use of hand and hat to frame the face
nice focus on the big brown eyes
i would have prefered to have a litle less front ligt to emphasis the nice bone structure of your model
excellent child portrait |
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06/29/2004 06:20:53 PM |
| too tight a crop for this pose, nice shot otherwise |
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06/29/2004 05:41:38 PM |
| First thing I noticed was the shadow. Some backlighting could've helped. |
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06/29/2004 01:30:32 PM |
| i love the outfit, not sure about the lipstick. Also, the light on her face is a little bright ... still, well done. |
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06/29/2004 07:54:28 AM |
Really cute photo.I would give it 10 but I feel it's little bit out of focus.
8. |
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06/29/2004 06:01:06 AM |
| Very nice, one to keep for posterity - maybe more separation of subject from the background could improve? |
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06/29/2004 12:31:48 AM |
Color seems washed out.
Cute pose. |
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06/28/2004 03:07:23 PM |
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06/28/2004 02:56:33 PM |
| Nice shot. I think this image could be better if your model was a little futher away from the backdrop. |
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06/28/2004 02:15:04 PM |
| Her lipstick is very overdone and unnatural looking. Also, there is an unappealing white highlight or line running the entire length of her lower lip. The subject needs to be further away from the backdrop---about a foot and a half. Then, a separate light can be directed at the backdrop to further eliminate shadows. The lighting on her face is awfully harsh. Her arms received more flattering light than her face. The subject is cute and her outfit is very appropriate. |
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06/28/2004 02:09:33 PM |
| lovely, but a bit too posed. that doesn't do justice to the free nature of a child. Here look is very nice though. |
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06/28/2004 01:47:46 PM |
| Charming potriat. Her pose is lovely. I think i would have preffered if she did not have any lipstick, to let her be a child. Surely it is colourfull. |
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06/28/2004 07:10:54 AM |
This is beautifull.
But because I get thes comments on my picture: The lipstick is overkill :)
I like the softness in this picture, and it's a lovely girl.
Just on the serious side, there are some dark shadows that maybe could have been avoided by different lighting. (7) |
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06/28/2004 01:06:01 AM |
| Darling shot, good pose. Light is a bit harsh in spots and the focus could be a little more sharp. I like this and hope you do well. 8 |
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