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06/29/2004 01:58:56 PM |
Hi from the Critique Club.
It seems you gave some thought to this shot, which is nice. I like the angle and the dof. For the composition, I think it might be improved without the dark area in the bottom right corner.
I think technically, its done pretty well - with clear focus where you want it, good colors and exposures. The subject itself, I don't find interesting. Whether I like yogurt or not, I don't think I'd be inclined to put a photo of yogurt cartons on my wall.
It does meet the challenge and is an okay photo, but just lacks appeal for me.
Hope this has been helpful.
Judy |
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06/21/2004 04:49:31 PM |
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06/19/2004 01:37:15 AM |
| Cool concept. I like the short DOF. |
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06/18/2004 05:29:03 PM |
| very well done....enjoy your mandarin orange! |
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06/17/2004 08:16:12 PM |
| Nice use of DOF. It would have helped if the one to the left of the in focus one was a differant flavor, but that is a bit of a nit pick. |
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06/17/2004 05:05:42 PM |
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06/16/2004 05:20:47 PM |
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06/16/2004 12:39:33 PM |
| Everything today looks like an ad. Very pretty, but where's the sense of urgency? Maybe yogurt is more vital to your life than mine :) |
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06/16/2004 12:03:01 PM |
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06/16/2004 09:15:39 AM |
| clever use of shallow DOF. needless to say, you like mandrin orange. You possibly could have moved the distracting yellow tags out of the way. |
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06/16/2004 08:18:22 AM |
| Very nice photo. I bet you got some strange looks in the store. |
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