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06/29/2004 12:33:26 PM |
Hi from the Critique Club!
I like the tones in this shot, but I do wonder if color would have added more interest in this being a "choice."
The angle of this does add interest to the shot, and I think overall the exposure is pretty good - although I agree that the white shoes distract from the rest of the photo because of their brightness. So technically, aside from the white shoes, I like this shot well enough.
The subject choice itself does not really carry much interest for me. When I judge a photo's strength in meeting the challenge, I first look at the shot without a title and without knowing for sure which challenge it was in - and see if I can figure it out. I can figure it out with this one, so the connection to the challenge is there - I just don't personally find it an interesting way of conveying choice. I didn't vote on the choices challenge, but I would have given this one a 6.
Shoes might have made a more interesting subject with some color maybe -and a more unique composition? Maybe include some feet with a different shoe on each foot and a pile of shoes nearby? Just some thoughts.
I hope this is helpful!
Judy |
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06/22/2004 08:18:01 PM |
| Composition is effective as is the sepia toning. Definitely a choice! |
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06/22/2004 12:36:25 AM |
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06/21/2004 05:33:01 PM |
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06/21/2004 06:37:52 AM |
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06/18/2004 11:51:53 AM |
Congratulations for your life, not difficult problems :)
the white shoes distract a little but good election in taking the picture in B&W
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06/17/2004 10:53:36 PM |
| Us guys don't have that problem |
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06/17/2004 08:50:38 PM |
| Definitely fits the challenge, I find the 'white' pair on the right of the shot very distracting and really too over pwering to the rest of the shot. |
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06/17/2004 06:49:43 PM |
... and some aid workers in Africa have to choose which kids live or die. Well I think the choices we make are quite easy really...
Shot is OK but lacks a wide tonal range (over and under exposed). |
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06/17/2004 12:36:18 AM |
| Interesting composition. The shoes in the center right seem over exposed. |
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06/16/2004 03:56:55 PM |
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06/16/2004 03:40:38 PM |
| rather unoriginal and the white sandals seem to be overexposed |
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06/16/2004 11:02:26 AM |
| color might have brought home the difficulty in choice... |
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