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09/23/2009 09:40:13 AM |
| and here I thought that I had commented on all nines, this one is very good and I like how you did this. |
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09/22/2009 11:32:16 PM |
| I'm sure you cut off the bottom of the image because you are hiding whatever is holding up the matches, but I think the image would be stronger if the match box was more prominent in the frame, both to add some color/take away some of the white and to put the bulk of the detail in the same place. As it is now, my eye wants to bounce between the match heads and the box. |
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09/22/2009 05:11:19 PM |
2 match entries in one challenge? Who would have though. Pyros.
I like this one more though because its has more going on in there, it has depth to it and its not nearly as static. |
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09/18/2009 04:03:53 AM |
I'm usually a big fan of shallow DoF but the two matches to the right of the unlit one are a little too in focus for the extreme oof match on the far left to work well together. I think if all the matches except the red one were more oof it would have worked better - if that makes sense.
I like the overall idea, colors, and lighting. |
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09/16/2009 09:41:19 PM |
| Selective desaturation can be a very useful tool when executed effectively. Here, the red of the matchbox seems distorted and out of place. I to like the idea, but, in my opinion, all nine matchsticks should also be in crisp focus. With the challenge subject being nine, I'd like to see the nine clearly distinguished in the image. Here, one item is distinguished, but even that one has some detraction with the red in the matchbox. Definitely some potential here, but this one needs much better execution to grow your score. 3. |
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09/16/2009 09:38:37 AM |
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09/16/2009 04:28:50 AM |
| Is this 'basic' editing??? |
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