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03/19/2009 04:53:29 PM |
You have asked for more comments in the gripe thread... I gave this a six which is in line with 177 other like-minded voters, 6 being the vote you received the most times. In my scale, 6 is good technical knowledge and composition, just a bit lacking in some areas.
Upon a revisit, I find that the object in the lower left hand corner to keep drawing my eye, stopping me from actually "looking" at the guy. So to improve the shot I would clone out, or crop out that part of the image. Also I find the girls behind the shoulder to be a distraction, but removing those might require a bit more work. I would have scored it more highly with those amendments as my eyes would remain fixed then on the main subject, which is a good one. Some of the other comments also mention a tighter crop which I presume is for the same reason as I suggest, the lower left corner. |
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03/17/2009 09:27:24 PM |
| Sweet capture. Perfect portraiture. |
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03/17/2009 09:16:52 PM |
| Interesting characterization and character!! 8 |
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03/17/2009 08:25:37 PM |
| Quite a character - not so keen on the punny title. ;-) |
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03/17/2009 05:35:12 PM |
| nice study (what about a tighter crop?) |
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03/17/2009 10:17:19 AM |
| Quite the fascinating character, like the sepia toning +1 |
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03/17/2009 06:40:27 AM |
| Nice processing in this well captured and interesting portrait. |
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03/16/2009 11:41:06 PM |
| Great street portrait. Powerful expression, and the eye contact works so well. The cigarette conspires to the expression as well. A glimpse into an interesting life makes life more interesting for the viewer as well! Well done. |
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03/16/2009 11:04:18 PM |
So honest and interesting.
Not voting yet. |
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03/16/2009 06:51:53 PM |
| Nice portrait... i like the smirk on his face. |
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03/16/2009 05:59:57 PM |
| love the expression, like he's in on a joke. 7 |
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03/16/2009 05:41:26 PM |
| I would have done just a touch more cropping...taken the girls out of the background and the shoulder to the left out...would have been a little more compelling |
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03/16/2009 03:37:03 PM |
| Nice shot, good tones, naff title |
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03/16/2009 11:44:45 AM |
| Love it! This is the type of photography that touches my soul! |
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03/16/2009 04:03:57 AM |
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03/16/2009 12:41:42 AM |
| I am sorry to tell you I'm burned out on the genre of photo. It's a good photo of a good subject, but I can't work up any enthusiasm for it. |
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03/15/2009 11:13:54 PM |
| Nice portrait - Maybe if you were tighter on the subject or cropped some of the empty space out on the left of his face. |
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03/15/2009 09:19:54 PM |
| This looks like a fascinating fellow - somehow the look I'd imagined of some scoundrel you'd meet in Bombay. Reminds me a bit of Ricardo Montalban for some reason. I think it is the eyes. Very nice shot. |
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03/15/2009 08:22:29 PM |
| i would like it to be cropped a little more on the left to remove the distracting thing in the lower left hand, but nice expression and details |
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03/15/2009 07:26:07 PM |
| Great shot. I like the sepia. |
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03/15/2009 10:21:30 AM |
| Very good detail in his face, interesting portrait. Some of the whites are a bit too bright. |
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03/15/2009 05:35:21 AM |
very intersting yet coz of quality... 6
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03/15/2009 03:25:05 AM |
| recommed a much tighter crop, 6 |
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03/15/2009 12:48:32 AM |
| Lovely portrait of the man and his turban. |
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03/14/2009 11:50:45 PM |
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03/14/2009 10:17:34 PM |
| The turbanator a man not to mess with :) |
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03/14/2009 04:57:52 PM |
| nice portrait, I like the sepia conversion |
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03/14/2009 02:09:35 PM |
| The tones realy make this pop, although the t-shirt may be too white. |
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03/14/2009 01:04:06 PM |
| toning is right on for this subject |
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03/14/2009 11:55:12 AM |
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03/14/2009 08:08:42 AM |
| You know, the funny thing about having a turban is that every pic that is taken of you is a pic of a guy with a turban. |
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03/14/2009 12:05:39 AM |
| Love the title. Wonderful portrait - he looks like he would have many stories to tell. |
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03/13/2009 10:46:11 PM |
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03/13/2009 05:40:18 PM |
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03/13/2009 01:23:20 PM |
| Great capture, the textures and detail are excellent. |
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03/13/2009 12:32:10 PM |
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03/13/2009 10:07:08 AM |
| This is a wonderful shot! Not so sure the title fits, but it made me giggle anyway. :) |
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03/13/2009 03:31:13 AM |
| nice tone and composition |
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03/13/2009 01:50:10 AM |
| Ha, love the smaoke hanging from his lip. |
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03/12/2009 09:19:40 PM |
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03/12/2009 07:41:33 PM |
| Nice tones and good character in the face. Good detail. |
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03/12/2009 03:40:18 PM |
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03/12/2009 03:25:02 PM |
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03/12/2009 02:13:23 PM |
| He seems like he'd be a pirate, I think it's the mustache and the earrings that make me think this. Great cultural portrait. |
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03/12/2009 11:38:27 AM |
| Effective color treatment in a good portrait, but there is some pretty bad artifacting going on in this image which is unfortunate. |
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03/12/2009 12:15:34 AM |
| Not an anti smoker but the cigarette draws my attention more than the turban. |
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03/11/2009 10:08:43 PM |
| An interesting guy for sure, but the lighting is a bit harsh... you lose details in your whites, especially in the cig, his shirt, and the top of his nose. |
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03/11/2009 09:48:20 PM |
| I guess size matters... For turbans. The sepia is perfect for this picture. |
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03/11/2009 04:26:36 PM |
| a little tighter crop from the left would have been better in my opinion |
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03/11/2009 04:16:51 PM |
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03/11/2009 03:37:47 PM |
| Heh - good title and I really like his look - friendly and perhaps just a wee bit slyly devious. |
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03/11/2009 02:33:24 PM |
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03/11/2009 02:22:48 PM |
| Nice portrait and good coloring to draw us into the photo. |
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03/11/2009 12:14:42 PM |
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03/11/2009 08:25:36 AM |
| I'm not a huge fan of sepia toning... I do like the character of the subject, though. |
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03/11/2009 08:18:12 AM |
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03/11/2009 05:40:43 AM |
| This is a great title, and a good photo as well. |
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03/11/2009 03:14:21 AM |
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03/11/2009 02:51:12 AM |
| Looks like a character. A good relaxed pose and look at the camera. |
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