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Heron
Heron
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Challenge: Best of 2008 (Advanced Editing VII*)
Camera: Nikon D70
Lens: Nikon AF Nikkor 300mm f/4.0
Location: Horicon Marsh
Date: Sep 6, 2008
Aperture: 5.0
ISO: 200
Shutter: 1/200
Galleries: Birds
Date Uploaded: Jan 15, 2009

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Statistics
Place: 523 out of 531
Avg (all users): 4.0000
Avg (commenters): 3.3333
Avg (participants): 4.0500
Avg (non-participants): 3.8491
Views since voting: 717
Views during voting: 337
Votes: 213
Comments: 10
Favorites: 0


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01/22/2009 02:20:53 PM
I only scored this one a 4 and here is my reasoning, hope the information helps.

The bird tends to get blend into the background, with this being an advanced rule set there are ways the background could have been toned down to bring more focus to the bird. If you have PS you can make layers of only the background or only the bird then make adjustments to help make the bird a focal point rather than just part of the image. Also cropping the right side to put the bird at the 1/3 line and cropping tighter on the bird would help. Alway think about what does not help the image hurts the image.
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01/22/2009 01:39:08 PM
Just not sharp enough to score well, I fear. Also, to make the shot more interesting, I would have cropped some off the right side so the subject is not so centered. I'm sure this was a beautiful sight to see.
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01/22/2009 03:27:16 AM
I submitted a very similar shot a while back. Yours is better than mine was, but also guilty of the same flaw. In a challenge with so many crisp, sharp birds (even in flight) this is just too soft. Good luck.
  Photographer found comment helpful.
01/19/2009 01:55:24 PM
this doesnt look in focus to
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01/19/2009 07:54:23 AM
just a little blurry and lack of detail is going to hurt you in this, maybe zooming in would have helped
  Photographer found comment helpful.
01/18/2009 07:39:01 PM
A tighter crop would help here i think. Plus the bird is slightly out of focus.
  Photographer found comment helpful.
01/17/2009 02:41:04 PM
Not in focus. Probably a higher shutter speed was required.
  Photographer found comment helpful.
01/17/2009 06:56:30 AM
herons are sure lovely birds - this one seems a bit lost in the grasses due to non-ideal lighting - and the necessary sharp focus to really separate the bird from the background seems to be missing as if it was taken with a slow shutter speed
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01/16/2009 02:06:44 PM
a bit oof
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01/16/2009 09:57:30 AM
The subject blends into the background too much.
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