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05/11/2004 09:59:15 PM |
| Excellent DOF and detail. |
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05/11/2004 02:57:08 PM |
| I find the bright highlights in the background a bit distracting, but a good picture otherwise |
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05/11/2004 08:00:59 AM |
| Excellent lighting and depth of field. |
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05/09/2004 09:51:08 PM |
Composition: Subject Placement, Cropping, Background 6
Technical: Focus, Exposure, Lighting, Processing 6
Appeal: Is it Interesting, Motivating, Etc. 5
How well does it meet the challenge: 7
Total Averaged Rating(Rounded) 6
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05/08/2004 11:48:11 PM |
| I like the visual rhythm and texture. The exposure level is right where it should be. The composition does cause a bit of visual stress though, as the lines tend to draw the eye away from the most interesting sharp texture and into the unfocused area. |
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05/08/2004 07:16:50 PM |
| Can't tell what it is but it's excellent use of shallow dof and you can't meet the challenge better than this. The subject isn't really that "interesting" though, however nice captured. No context. A good seven for me. |
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05/08/2004 08:37:27 AM |
| Great DoF and composition...well done |
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05/08/2004 06:55:28 AM |
| I'd like to see it either straight, or more diagonal, this is so close to straight, that it just seems crooked. |
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05/07/2004 06:58:35 PM |
| I find that yhe DOF is too narrow on this image and causes it to lose perspective. Try a higher f-stop |
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05/07/2004 12:27:14 PM |
Composition: Subject Placement, Cropping, Background 7
Technical: Focus, Exposure, Lighting, Processing 7
Appeal: Is it Interesting, Motivating, Etc.? 4
How well does it meet the challenge: 8
Total Averaged Rating 6 Dick
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05/07/2004 11:15:12 AM |
| nice shot but its not level. looks more like a rush shot just to make the challenge. |
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05/07/2004 09:41:27 AM |
| I would have liked this better with either more depth of field, or more of the blurry part cropped off at the top. As it is, the perspective effect you seem to have been going for is lost with the focus. Just cropping off the white blurs at the top improves the composition greatly. (they are a bright distraction) |
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05/07/2004 01:14:38 AM |
| good DOF, nice composition |
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05/06/2004 06:19:57 PM |
| Good use of DOF, nice framing/cropping. Perhaps a limited market, but I can see it hanging on the walls of factories and appearing as a magazine illustration. Good job. |
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05/06/2004 06:18:20 PM |
| Composition, lighting, depth of field all nicely done. Good mood in this photo. |
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05/06/2004 10:29:16 AM |
| Nice use of DOF to give the image it`s interest |
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05/05/2004 09:26:27 PM |
| Wish this was aligned better as it's a bit off-center. But that's just my preference though. Otherwise, great picture! I like the DOF, it helps focus attention on the detail in front. |
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05/05/2004 02:09:33 AM |
| It would have worked much better if it was not tilted. Good idea though. |
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05/05/2004 01:09:14 AM |
| to me... this needs more depth of focus to make it work. Just the first bars doesn't carry it. The repetition makes the compostion and the focus carries an important part of the repetition. |
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05/05/2004 12:37:27 AM |
| I think it would be nicer if it was centered. |
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05/05/2004 12:32:58 AM |
| Thats a cool picture! I like it a lot |
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