I love the idea and the composition. But it feels a bit over smoothed to me ... and your model looks drugged out.
When I vote, I don't usually look at the title. I am sorry to say, that if I had paid attention to your title, I would have given this an extra point or two. Stepford wives, indeed! Looking at your portfolio, it's obvious you have talent. I hope you hang here awhile and share it!
Definitely "Stepfordized". *smile* But, I wish it weren't. The title saves it a bit... but ignoring the title, as some do, the eye is just too wild to be a 'perfect' photo, in my opinion. (not voting yet)