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05/11/2004 05:47:47 PM |
crop out the fence to focus more on the wheels, nice lines |
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05/11/2004 10:39:24 AM |
Composition: Subject Placement, Cropping, Background 7
Technical: Focus, Exposure, Lighting, Processing 6
Appeal: Is it Interesting, Motivating, Etc.? 4
How well does it meet the challenge: 10
Total Averaged Rating 6.75 Dick
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05/10/2004 08:01:44 PM |
The challenge is well met in choice of subject. It is an interesting composition of rusted objects. Aesthetically I like it far better when I crop off the Chain link fence.
The lighting is very subdued on such a dark subject, and with repetitive objects it is hard to establish a point of foucus. Overall this is a very soft picture of some very hard wheels. The colors themselves are also dull as rust is said to be. However, a study of other photos in this challenge, show that rust can exhibit some very lively and attractive colors.
A 4. |
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05/10/2004 01:29:52 PM |
Well done...good colour, use of lighting and depth. Very good image |
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05/07/2004 11:07:50 PM |
Composition: Subject Placement, Cropping, Background 5
Technical: Focus, Exposure, Lighting, Processing 5
Appeal: Is it Interesting, Motivating, Etc. 5
How well does it meet the challenge: 7
Total Averaged Rating(Rounded) 6
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05/07/2004 09:43:08 AM |
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05/06/2004 11:53:12 AM |
A different viewpoint ..(losing the fence and taking in just the wheels) added to a boost in contrast, saturation and sharpness would make this a winner |
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05/05/2004 10:54:49 PM |
nice idea, altho none of them are sharply focussed |
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05/05/2004 06:34:33 PM |
great compostion, could be sharper though |
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05/05/2004 01:39:46 PM |
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05/05/2004 09:57:13 AM |
suggestions: needs sharper focus, lose the fence at the top and include only the wheels, filling the entire frame. |
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05/05/2004 09:05:15 AM |
Cropping out the chainlink fence would have made the frame more dramatic. |
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05/05/2004 06:23:55 AM |
The picture is great but a better contrast or a little bit of level equalisation would have brought this picture 2-3 points higher. |
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