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Beaten, Abandoned and Scared...
Beaten, Abandoned and Scared...
JaimeVinas


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Challenge: Abandoned (Advanced Editing VII)
Camera: Canon EOS-400D Rebel XTi
Lens: Canon EF 85mm f/1.8 USM
Date: Nov 2, 2008
Galleries: Portraiture
Date Uploaded: Nov 2, 2008

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Statistics
Place: 36 out of 148
Avg (all users): 5.9206
Avg (commenters): 6.4545
Avg (participants): 6.1961
Avg (non-participants): 5.7333
Views since voting: 1301
Views during voting: 373
Votes: 126
Comments: 14
Favorites: 0


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11/10/2008 05:24:28 PM
hey jaime .. BRILLIANT .. love this shot .. she looks scared and frightened which is like an abandonment in a way .. excellent processing how you've made her stand out in the scene .. :)
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11/10/2008 07:43:58 AM
Nicely shot, I have to agree with the others about the title. But this is a stand out shot, I love it.
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 Comments Made During the Challenge
11/09/2008 10:54:35 PM
The story's a bit of a stretch, and without the title I wouldn't have thought her abandoned. She doesn't look terribly beaten either. Certainly scared though, as her expression and pose are fairly convincing.
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11/09/2008 07:35:45 AM
Looks contrived.
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11/08/2008 12:59:05 AM
Great shot! A tad too much editing for my taste.
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11/05/2008 10:30:03 PM
Superb! 9
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11/04/2008 10:19:21 PM
Very nicely edited and shot. Love the tones to this shot. I know the aim was to make her look abandoned, but to me, she's a pretty model, trying to look the part but can't do it as she's too refined. The shot is beautiful but, doesn't fully say abandoned in my personal opinion
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11/04/2008 06:40:07 PM
Good idea and strong composition. Just a touch over processed. Would have liked the stairs and much of the wall to be darker and grittier.
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11/04/2008 05:23:43 PM
I love it! The pose, the girl, the colors (or lack of), the blanket and everything is great. I feel cold and abondoned just looking at it.
My first picture over 8 in this challenge after voting 97% - an easy 10!
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11/03/2008 08:54:05 PM
regarding your title, the model looks very clean and well groomed, hair styled and makeup quite nice, but besides that, it's a great shot, very well done
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11/03/2008 08:17:46 PM
The processing is a bit heavy for my tastes, but I like the composition, the use of the negative space and the model's expression is very good.
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11/03/2008 07:00:59 PM
Meets Challenge:2
Technical:2
Interestingness:1
Creativity:1
TOTAL: 6
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11/03/2008 01:28:48 PM
Nice job. The face is very well exposed and it has such a neat gothic feel.
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11/03/2008 10:21:24 AM
Great color tones, good facial expression (she has really big eyes!) and nice composition.
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