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Intergalactic Virus
Intergalactic Virus
Samara


Photograph Information Photographer's Comments
Challenge: Abstract (Advanced Editing II)
Camera: Canon PowerShot S50
Location: Camel Outerspace
Date: Apr 26, 2004
Aperture: 5.6
ISO: Auto
Shutter: 1/1000
Galleries: Abstract, Digital Art
Date Uploaded: Apr 28, 2004

Out of camera except for cropping and resizing.

Statistics
Place: 119 out of 208
Avg (all users): 5.0479
Avg (commenters): 7.2857
Avg (participants): 5.0000
Avg (non-participants): 5.1212
Views since voting: 1032
Votes: 167
Comments: 8
Favorites: 0


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05/16/2004 08:50:19 AM
Hello from the Critique Club.
This is a good, well composed and interesting photo. To me, the image conveys a great sense of captured motion and feels like it's vibrating with energy. I especially enjoy the interaction between the subject and background elements and the play of color between the two.

Some suggestions:
Your comment says a lot. This image is good, but it could have been great with a few minor adjustments. Minor contrast, perhaps a boost to saturation. Maybe a little coarse sharpening to really bring out the lines orbiting inside the ball.

I think the lighting is a bit off, but I have no idea how you would fix it. I like the specular highlights, but they draw your eye to what looks like a window and a mirror reflecting daylight onto the subject. Not terrible, but I realized that I was trying to figure out what I was seeing in the reflections rather than getting lost in the photo. One of the highlights seems to be a different color than the rest, possibly from an incandescent lamp. I probably would have re-colored it to match the other highlights or simply cloned it out.

Final thoughts:
I like this image, but feel that the lack of post-processing is keeping it from having the impact it could have had.

Feel free to critique my critique,
Ara
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 Comments Made During the Challenge
05/05/2004 02:50:52 AM
nice, it needs a bit more contrast to give it some umph.
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05/04/2004 07:51:20 PM
Beautiful abstract picture. I love the colors and the brightness.
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05/04/2004 06:08:45 PM
Very nicely done. Your rainbow of colors is dynamic. I'd like to remove the two bright white spots - on on the left front of the ball and the other behind the left side. Overall an excellent entry.
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05/04/2004 03:08:35 PM
So THAT'S what they look like. Thanks for the tip-off. This is a good subject.
Ideal for this challenge.
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05/03/2004 07:35:29 PM
Way cool......
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05/03/2004 10:21:16 AM
Neat object. Good background to go with it.
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05/03/2004 12:36:51 AM
Quite cool. Love the prismatic effect.
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