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Challenge: Abstract (Advanced Editing II)
Camera: Canon EOS-300D Rebel
Location: home
Date: Apr 28, 2004
Aperture: 5.6
ISO: 800
Shutter: 1/10
Date Uploaded: Apr 28, 2004

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convert to tif
crop
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File Name
CRW_0886.CRW
Camera Model Name
Canon EOS DIGITAL REBEL
Shooting Date/Time
4/27/2004 2:33:02 PM
Shooting Mode
Aperture-Priority AE
Tv( Shutter Speed )
1/10
Av( Aperture Value )
5.6
Metering Mode
Evaluative
Exposure Compensation
0
ISO Speed
800
Lens
18.0 - 55.0mm
Focal Length
55.0mm
Image Size
3072x2048
Image Quality
RAW
Flash
Off
White Balance
Custom
AF Mode
AI Focus AF
Parameters
Contrast +1
Sharpness +1
Color saturation +1
Color tone Normal
Color Space
sRGB
File Size
6753KB
Drive Mode
Continuous shooting

Statistics
Place: 189 out of 208
Avg (all users): 4.2658
Avg (commenters): 3.8333
Avg (participants): 3.9688
Avg (non-participants): 4.7258
Views since voting: 881
Votes: 158
Comments: 6
Favorites: 0

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 Comments Made During the Challenge
05/09/2004 07:06:28 PM
abstract doesn't have to mean blurred beyond recognition. I think this is inappropriate blurring here. Had this been in focus, I think it would have been more appealing to me. I like the color, and the waves coming from the object are ok, the crop is different, and lighting appears to be fine, I just wish i could SEE this better. ~Heather~
  Photographer found comment helpful.
 05/09/2004 05:50:22 AM
love the blue in this
  Photographer found comment helpful.
 05/08/2004 09:15:27 PM
Wow! Wow was my reaction to the title. 'Untitled' would have been just fine. Putting editing information in the title is not a good idea....describe the final image...my forays into titling are not the best....but 'Blue Swirl' comes to mind....since it is apparent that it is blue, perhaps just 'Swirl'.

Well maybe something more than a crop would have been in order.
This is a summation of a critque....I would love to sit and critique every image in a challenge....I cannot. However: In the abstract form lines should be discernible but the subject should not. If you feel the only way you can make the subject indiscernible is to use camera blur, than you might need to get another subject and shoot it without blurring. This image as is might have been better presented with a lesser crop and a vertical orientation. The shooting idea might have done OK if the lines of the swirl were more pronounced and the object on the left were more in focus. As you description does not state what you shot or how you shot it I have very little to work with.

Hope that helps a little. Sorry if you were offended by the inital comment. RoB

Message edited by author 2004-05-10 09:43:17.
  Photographer found comment helpful.
 05/04/2004 06:02:09 PM
The image looks good in the slim jim format you've presented.
  Photographer found comment helpful.
 05/04/2004 10:18:05 AM
it is distracting when people sneak in image details in the title.

  Photographer found comment helpful.
 05/03/2004 04:30:44 AM
I like the blue and the radial motion implied; would probably cropped the right side altogether and left it at the blue.
  Photographer found comment helpful.


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