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04/18/2002 12:04:00 PM |
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04/14/2002 02:41:00 PM |
Looks like if we had seen the plate more, you could have even added that into the curves of the photo. |
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04/14/2002 03:03:00 AM |
Neat curves, but what's the red stuff on the fork?? |
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04/13/2002 09:37:00 AM |
Pepper on spaghetti? Interesting shot. Everything in the picture has a curve: the bowl, the spaghetti, the fork, and the spoon. Well done. |
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04/12/2002 07:35:00 PM |
This could have been better had the fork not been steamy or used. |
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04/11/2002 12:54:00 PM |
the red reflection (or stain?) on the tines of the fork is a little distrubing! :) have you ever tired poppy seeds on pasta? It's delicious, and would potograph better than crushed pepper. |
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04/10/2002 10:23:00 AM |
Is that sauce on the fork, or a reflection? I could do without it. Otherwise nice, but tonally a little flat. |
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04/09/2002 04:11:00 PM |
Good idea. I would have liked it better with more light, and maybe without the spoon or seasoning. |
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04/09/2002 03:28:00 PM |
This makes me very hungry......difinitely lots of curves... It looks like everything is in focus. Great picture. :) |
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04/09/2002 12:15:00 PM |
The concept of this photo was good, but the end result is lacking. It could be improved by using a clean fork! Plus I would lose the pepper, sorry it looks likes bugs to me! |
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04/09/2002 11:29:00 AM |
mm. makes me hungry.. : ) |
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04/09/2002 10:07:00 AM |
Why is there tomatoe sauce on lthe fork and not on the sphegetti? |
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04/09/2002 07:59:00 AM |
Great composition, the herbs on the pasta really add to the shot! |
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04/09/2002 07:44:00 AM |
are u trying to make me hungry? i would've tried some highlights on the strands. |
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04/09/2002 05:42:00 AM |
a clean fork may have been a better option here - I find myself drawn to it to figure out what the heck is on it. :P |
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04/09/2002 02:41:00 AM |
This feels very flat. If the lighting were altered, it would have given a greater feeling of depth within the coils of the pasta. |
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04/08/2002 10:58:00 PM |
I would love to know your intent here. Great composition except for the "used fork" in my opinion. What were you trying to convey? |
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04/08/2002 07:14:00 PM |
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04/08/2002 05:12:00 PM |
nice curves, fork looks like you've just pulled it out of someone! good exposure, original idea. |
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04/08/2002 04:23:00 PM |
Now THAT is lots of curves ! Nice capture:) |
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04/08/2002 01:34:00 PM |
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04/08/2002 12:40:00 PM |
The pasta lacks a little colour maybe a little sauce may help? |
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04/08/2002 12:34:00 PM |
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04/08/2002 11:30:00 AM |
I had this idea myself but didn't pursue it. Your bowl really sets off the curve concept with the rings around the edges. Maybe a little twist of pasta around the fork would have added some more excitement to this shot.. Maybe a sprig of parsley? Very nice work... |
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04/08/2002 10:55:00 AM |
I would have included the entire plate too, cropping could be better |
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04/08/2002 10:23:00 AM |
You are making me hungry! Good entry. |
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04/08/2002 08:47:00 AM |
I feel hungry! Light is a bit 'flat'. |
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04/08/2002 01:53:00 AM |
I think the lipstick on the fork is a nice touch. It added a bit of interest and helped tell the story. I think the angle makes the photo a little sterile but for all I know that was the best angle for you to also get the plate. I won't second guessyou :) |
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04/08/2002 12:40:00 AM |
This idea crossed my mind... great layout.. i couldn't get mine to look appetizing. |
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04/08/2002 12:14:00 AM |
Yum! But one hint - clean your fork and spoon before taking the shot. |
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