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emotional disproportion-self portrait (they are both me)
emotional disproportion-self portrait (they are both me)
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Challenge: Proportion (Basic Editing I)
Camera: Sony DSC-F717
Location: my studio
Date: Apr 27, 2004
Aperture: 8.0
ISO: 100
Shutter: 20 sec
Date Uploaded: Apr 27, 2004

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Place: 251 out of 290
Avg (all users): 4.2604
Avg (commenters): 5.4444
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Votes: 265
Comments: 11
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05/03/2004 09:15:35 PM
like the idea but feel the clarity on the right could have improved the shot
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04/30/2004 09:30:40 AM
A nice experiment that doesn't really work as you on the right is blurred and you on the left appears to have a crease running down your face! There is also some marks in the top left of image (Cannot make it out due to low resolution of monitor).
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04/29/2004 07:05:06 PM
i'm surprised this pic isn't blurrier. creative.
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04/29/2004 06:48:51 AM
nice idea
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04/28/2004 08:15:36 PM
if you need to explain your photo in your title, chances are it's not that good.
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04/28/2004 06:02:49 PM
Clever. The line down the face on the left has something to do with the double exposure I guess... Like the grainy look.
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04/28/2004 04:58:06 PM
a bit of a goofy title; expressions are good, lighting on the right "subject" needs to be stronger as he/you fades into the background
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04/28/2004 04:11:58 PM
Without the title I don't think I would have caught on that both these images were of yourself. As a photo it has potential although I don't think you quite caught it here. There is a line of shadow running vertically down the face of you in the tie and you in the sweater are far too fuzzy and unfocused. To make a more obvious point about proportion you should have made sure your shirt and tie were much neater. At any rate, I think this is stretching the idea of proportion a bit. Sure there is contrast between a working stiff and a casual guy in a sweater but I don't think that really illustrates proportion or lack of proportion.
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04/28/2004 03:42:07 PM
It seems a little bit blured to me plus the guy on the left has a line running through his left eye. otherwise not bad
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04/28/2004 07:48:24 AM
Very creative!
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04/28/2004 12:18:43 AM
interesting work visually... the title stinks. "Explanations" are so degrading when used in the titles... just my humble opinion...
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