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not quite the right proportion
not quite the right proportion
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Challenge: Proportion (Basic Editing I)
Camera: PhaseOne LightPhase
Location: Studio
Date: Apr 26, 2004
Aperture: 22.5
ISO: 50
Shutter: 500
Date Uploaded: Apr 27, 2004

 I made a make-shift fountain out of a glass vase by drilling a hole into the side of it and then using a small fountain pump I ran green water into the vase. I found a little egg cup that was alot smaller but about the same color. A few things, I do not like the line that was left in the background but because of the rules I left it. You can still see two little lines where the fishing line was used to help hold the vase in place. The rest of the line was eliminated in levels. This is possible because the subject was back-lit. The bottom of the vase is cut off to much, but this is to hide the line from the pump that is filling the vase. I plan on getting rid of the lines and moving the crop down some by using Photoshop in a manner that is not leagle for this challenge. Once I get around to becoming a member I will post the finished product in my portfolio. Thanks and enjoy.

Statistics
Place: 9 out of 290
Avg (all users): 6.3310
Avg (commenters): 7.2222
Avg (participants): 6.1563
Avg (non-participants): 6.4717
Views since voting: 2305
Votes: 287
Comments: 20
Favorites: 1 (view)

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 Comments Made During the Challenge
05/04/2004 03:10:49 PM
I wish the bottom of the pitcher was in the photo, It would make a strong composition stronger. There is alot of white in the upper left, either re shoot or crop to match more closely.
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 05/04/2004 01:40:50 AM
looks like jello in the cup, the back ground looks very harsh, other than that I like it alot. 7
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 05/03/2004 09:06:25 PM
This is a really interesting image, well composed, great color choices, and well focused. The line between wall and floor is a little distracting though.
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 05/03/2004 01:34:41 PM
What's that (tilted) horizontal line?
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 05/03/2004 09:42:14 AM
Simple idea, interesting and unique execution. Good colors and I love that the little container is all bubbly.
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 05/02/2004 02:28:11 PM
Good answer to the challenge! Nice colours and composition.
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 05/02/2004 11:36:24 AM
Handsome image, and nice set-up. It's a little too contrasty for my taste.
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 05/01/2004 04:04:15 PM
Nice picture - a 7 from me. Too bad with the grey horizontal line though...
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 05/01/2004 01:40:04 AM
if you went this far setting this up, why not go all the way? this would have been a 10 for me - without the tilted line in the background, the cropping of the bottle, the stains around the cup. I loved the coilours, it illustrates the concept really well 8
 05/01/2004 01:38:24 AM
wow one of my ribbon pics
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 05/01/2004 12:46:48 AM
Nice idea that needs better execution. More back lighting would add to the drama and the horizontal(ish) line in the background (edge of table?) is a bit distracting
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 04/30/2004 08:01:44 PM
Very Nice!!
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 04/30/2004 09:35:40 AM
Excellent use of green and a clever setup. Shame the line indicating horizon isn't straight.
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 04/29/2004 08:21:43 AM
cropped too toght on the bottom,background is washed out and out of focus
 04/29/2004 07:31:57 AM
You got it!
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 04/29/2004 01:52:01 AM
i like this one ... although the grey edge in the background is slightly distracting ... what is this? absinthe?
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 04/28/2004 10:08:12 PM
Great high key shot - well composed and lighted. My only minor complaint is the gray line where the "floor" meets the wall. Great choice of shutter speed.
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 04/28/2004 02:53:08 PM
I like your colors and shapes. Novel idea!
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 04/28/2004 06:02:24 AM
A winner
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 04/28/2004 02:15:15 AM
I like the color a lot !
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