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Challenge: Your Occupation III (Advanced Editing VII)
Collection: Portfolio
Camera: Canon EOS-40D
Lens: Canon EF 24-70mm f/2.8L USM
Location: israel yavne my backyard
Date: Aug 10, 2008
Aperture: 4.5
ISO: 100
Shutter: 1\160
Galleries: Still Life, Science and Technology
Date Uploaded: Aug 10, 2008

working for intel as equipment tech.
My doghter modeling for me with my suit hood.
couldn't do it inside the fab-it's forbidden to take picture overthere.
taken at middle of the day at 36 deg C.(very hot...) i wanted the white to be burned).
She handled it like a pro...
converted from RAW, adjusted exp'levels, contarast.

Statistics
Place: 23 out of 98
Avg (all users): 6.2556
Avg (commenters): 6.4615
Avg (participants): 5.9778
Avg (non-participants): 6.3481
Views since voting: 1275
Views during voting: 396
Votes: 180
Comments: 17
Favorites: 1 (view)


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08/23/2008 06:41:26 PM
Critique Club Review:

Color Saturation and Hue: All three are done well. Nothing is over saturated, hues are realistic, skin tones are great.

Brightness and contrast: Contrast is excellent, however it appears that to get the reflection bright enough, the highlights such as the gloved hand, and some areas on the back of the head, are blown out and featureless.

Focus and depth of field: Focus is excellent. Depth of field is good, but I find myself wondering if I like the back of the head soft or not.

The background in this image is a bit distracting. The grid pattern changes from the top to the bottom of the picture, and then there is that featurless bright white area at the upper left of the image that distracts a bit. Since this is an advanced editing challenge, the white spot, and the brightness of the gloves and head covering could be dealt with.

I really like the reflection in the wafer. Crisply sharp, and great detail. The pose works very well. The intent gaze of the subject at the wafer is very appropriate for this job illustration.

Very nice work. Congratulations on your top 25 finish.
08/20/2008 08:50:41 AM
Where'd you get the wafer?
 Comments Made During the Challenge
08/17/2008 10:12:00 PM
I'll be surprised if this isn't on the first page or two. Very well done.
08/15/2008 06:37:31 AM
i like the choice of reflection to show the face - good control of focus
08/14/2008 08:56:24 PM
sweet photo, good luck
08/14/2008 01:21:18 PM
that´s a good idea, but it´s not clear what the white thing at the left corner is.
08/13/2008 09:57:24 PM
the eyes just don't seem right
08/13/2008 01:56:38 PM
I kinda like the almost cross-eyed look. Neat idea for the challenge, too!
08/12/2008 07:37:42 PM
nice shot except for the white blobby things on left...can't see what they are, they draw the eye away from you.
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08/12/2008 05:04:18 AM
I vote 4 u
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08/12/2008 12:37:13 AM
I like how the head just floats
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08/11/2008 09:24:56 PM
I wish I knew what those white things were on the left and right. I'm certain afterwards, you can explain. :~)
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08/11/2008 01:29:23 PM
and a very clean shot. good luck
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08/11/2008 10:24:38 AM
Great shot! One of my favorites in the challenge. Hope it wins a ribbon!
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08/11/2008 08:30:56 AM
So do I. If I brought a camera in I'd get fired though.
Really strong photo but the image on the back of the wafer dwarfs the subject a bit too mush so you dont immediately realize this is a reflection.
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08/11/2008 02:11:08 AM
Excellent....... 7
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08/11/2008 12:45:27 AM
I wonder how many people will realize this is a reflection. I only realized after trying to figure out what the bright white bit was in the lower left corner.

This photo is almost a nightmare to me actually. I worked for a company that made RAM wafers that look much like what you're holding. The bunny suits, oh god, the suits... Man, I hated that place!
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