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04/13/2004 11:11:28 PM |
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04/13/2004 10:27:37 PM |
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04/13/2004 12:30:21 PM |
| Great subject. But obvious horizontals shown askew drive me crazy. |
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04/12/2004 05:00:43 PM |
| doesn't do a whole lot for me but it looks as if you might need something larger to stop it from rolling down the hill to the left |
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04/11/2004 05:26:54 PM |
| Look like a souvenir photo... using some trick to make it look different could help... may be closing diafragm to minimum (F8 or similar) and shooting more close could had made the back to blur a lot given a nice effect to the same photo... just an idea. |
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04/11/2004 02:30:32 AM |
| Hi, you are standing when taking the picture, right ? Try to make it a special shot, by shooting from the ground or find something where you can stand on, otherwise you get shots that we all see everyday. Also the object is centered which is against the rule of thirds. Hope this was helpful. Yours, Jan |
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04/11/2004 02:20:26 AM |
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04/10/2004 10:50:59 PM |
| i like the neat image... it's brilliant quality; too bad the balance of the shot isn't that good... |
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04/10/2004 11:49:09 AM |
| A slightly more interesting angle, not square on the side, with your subject would have helped here. |
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04/10/2004 09:32:28 AM |
| Picture needs to be leveled, if the background was entirely the old house, would be better, hopefully was something really horrid on the side where you took the picture, otherwise I would shoot it from other side showing the front of the monument. |
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04/10/2004 06:16:59 AM |
| if a photo isn't level, it makes it a bit hard to look at. You can rotate clockwise in photoshop, maybe 5 degrees, to fix this. As far as the rest of the photo goes, I like the composition, being in front of an important looking building gives a certain amount of importance to the site. 7 |
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04/09/2004 02:04:58 PM |
| composition is off. It could have been a really nice shot if you moved the cannon down in the shot and framed up the house as well. |
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04/08/2004 08:23:45 PM |
| House on the background is in sharp focus and crooked,gun well exposed,nice snapshot 6. |
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04/08/2004 10:12:29 AM |
| I think the background is a bit distracting. |
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04/08/2004 09:39:21 AM |
| no more war and cannon picts. please. 7 |
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04/08/2004 08:33:32 AM |
| Would the background have been more interesting if you had taken this shot from the other side rather than looking across the road? |
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04/07/2004 11:38:22 PM |
| i like this shot-but horizon(lawn) line is slanting, make sure in viewfinder your background is level- it will give your'e subject more focus |
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04/07/2004 09:13:29 PM |
| A couple of things might help this image.... first a straight roof top across the top of the image. Secondly, perhaps you could have gotten a better angle to avoid the distractions in the background. Maybe through the trees with a shallow depth of field might help. |
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04/07/2004 07:36:27 PM |
| Focus more on the wheels or the object itself, rather than the capturing the surroundings. |
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04/07/2004 03:04:11 PM |
| If I had taken the shot, for personal choice I might have decided to be a little straight on to the subject - in order to get the background wheel within the circumference of the wheel in the foreground. And I'm trying to bite my tongue, but I have to point out that it's wonky. The house in the background, though boring, is in keeping with the period feel of the cannon, so I think it's relevant. I think more focus on the wheels might also have made it more in keeping with the challenge. Still an interesting subject though - 5 (6 if less wonky) |
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04/07/2004 02:54:22 PM |
| not bad, but the angle/composition is very much too much like a snapshot |
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04/07/2004 11:50:33 AM |
| I don't like the background. What would be the background from the other side of the cannon? It's a little crooked too (picky, picky) |
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04/07/2004 06:40:28 AM |
| I do like this picture but the slanting background does put me off slightly. |
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04/07/2004 06:01:13 AM |
| another angle would have taken this better |
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04/07/2004 04:26:22 AM |
| Sloping horizon is very offputting. General impression is one of a snapshot. Not really sure what you wanted to achieve with this shot. Think about how you would have improved the composition here. |
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04/07/2004 02:09:53 AM |
| Horizon needs straighteniing. I think a shallower DOF would lend to a more pleasing image. |
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04/07/2004 12:40:31 AM |
| try taking this picture from the ground up and to the left...It would give the picture more perspective |
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