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Wheel Peep
Wheel Peep
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Challenge: Wheels (Basic Editing I)
Camera: HP PhotoSmart 735
Location: Gibraltar, View on to the west bay.
Date: Apr 5, 2004
Aperture: f:4.3
ISO: 100
Shutter: 1/98
Galleries: Urban, Architecture
Date Uploaded: Apr 6, 2004

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04/20/2004 10:22:21 AM
***Greeetings from the Critique Club!***

i realize that i commented on your photo during the challenge, but was somewhat obtuse as all i said was "interesting". :) let me elaborate!

first off, i really like the framing of the shot (as opposed to the subject). the use of the wheels "cut-out" (or whatever you want to call it :) sets up the alignment of the shot. i'm a big stickler for what the edges of your shot are doing, and i think you've handled your edges well. actually i think the "alignment" aspect is the meat of the shot. the "wheel" subject comes afterward, which i like. its not a straight-forward "wheel shot".

further, i think that the sepia tone helped to both reduce the amount of distracting elements and to focus on the darkness of the wheels.

as a side-thought i also find the layering to be fairly effective.

when i look at a photo i usually run through a bunch of alternate "what-if" questions. and with yours i have a hard time coming up with anything that i might have done differently. usually i think of things such as point-of-view, contrast, colors, edges...perhaps the only thing i might have an issue with would be the amount of texture...maybe its too textured... (honestly i dont think it is, but i'm trying here;). I wonder what would happen if you turned the camera a bit more to the right and got more of the sky and thus pushing the line of sight to the left of the shot...you might get more white-space (the sky) and the holes would then appear to "expand" (from left to right) - email me if this doesn't make sense :) i'll send you a diagram of what i'm talking about.

overall a very "interesting" shot ;)

congrats!

the-O-ster
 Comments Made During the Challenge
04/13/2004 10:35:18 PM
alot of imagination went into this shot - i like it - very out of the ordinary.
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04/13/2004 02:51:14 PM
really difficult one...
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04/12/2004 04:39:04 PM
nice composition
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04/12/2004 03:22:39 PM
should do very well. Nice eye and very good composition
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04/11/2004 01:19:14 AM
Interesting perspective.
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04/10/2004 10:10:35 PM
very very nice !
superb!
very good job!
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04/10/2004 12:25:28 AM
Interesting perspective.
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04/08/2004 10:50:23 PM
Nice job of framing within the frame. I think that would make a good challenge even. Think I'll suggest it!
TC
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04/08/2004 06:22:58 PM
Nice viewpoint, I liked it.
04/08/2004 01:57:28 PM
Very nice POV and good capture.
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04/08/2004 01:47:00 PM
Excellent
04/08/2004 10:48:30 AM
this is the only cannon wheel picture I like. but remember MAKE PHOTOS NOT WAR !!!!
04/07/2004 11:37:55 PM
interesting
04/07/2004 01:49:45 PM
I like the perspective.
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04/07/2004 09:18:21 AM
History, isn't it great. good view makes me want to know more about the place
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04/07/2004 01:01:51 AM
Very creative! I like the composition very much. I have always been intrigued with seeing objects through other objects and like that you were able to carry it through twice. I like the neutral colors as well. Good luck on the challenge. I hope you are one of the ribbon winners!!
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