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06/04/2008 06:45:40 PM |
| Wow, all the comments and almost 100% mentioned cropping out the top. I guess that thought will stick with you. They're both very cute. |
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06/03/2008 07:38:13 AM |
| Nice subject and expression, but I would of crop everything over her head. |
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06/03/2008 05:29:50 AM |
| Tighter crop would improve this IMHO because the background is too complex & too much pulling the eye away from the subjects. (When I "hand-crop" just above her head, this is a very nice portrait.) Hope that helps. :) |
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06/02/2008 05:16:58 PM |
| while I like the portrait itself, the composition is poor. They get lost in all the negative space at the top. A close view would have worked better |
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06/01/2008 10:12:27 PM |
| great photo but if it had been cropped just above the lady and dogs heads, I think it would have more impact without the unneccesary space above them |
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06/01/2008 01:02:27 AM |
| They look deathly cute together, but that background makes the image look like a snapshot. Cropping away the rail at the top would help a lot. |
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06/01/2008 12:14:57 AM |
| I think it would have improved it a lot to crop out the railing and make the rest of the picture larger. |
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05/31/2008 12:33:24 AM |
| exposure OK but too much background above head |
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05/30/2008 09:26:06 PM |
| Is this a portrait of a lady or a female dog? They are both nice, but there are two. I think there is a bit too much background. I keep wanting to look up to see what is up there. |
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05/29/2008 11:11:04 PM |
| The background is a bit distracting. I think cropping the top of the picture might have helped to bring more focus to the portrait. |
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05/29/2008 12:32:40 PM |
| wish this was cropped tighter on the top, at least below the railing |
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05/29/2008 12:12:20 AM |
| there's too much space at the top, it takes away the focus from her |
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05/28/2008 12:51:57 PM |
| Poorly composed... should have cropped tighter |
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05/28/2008 09:18:34 AM |
| I would've turned the woman sideways a bit for a slimming effect.. her shoulders combined with the longer focal length make her look big. I would've also come in a lot closer to her face to throw the background further out of focus. |
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