I would not have put this down as one of yours. I have to say I LOVE the composition, especially the fact that the bright red of the cycle and cyclist adds to the sense of interloping. I do find the light flare and slight central light haze a bit offputting, but the fact that this scored in the 3's is quite frankly astonishing to me
The flare/spot and the dark interior... I'm not sure this one works. I'm sorry. It just needs a clear subject/focus matter. These seems to be too much going on and my eye doesn't find a place to rest.
That's the most awkward looking groom I've ever seen. I'm guessing you were the photographer or a guest at the wedding when the cyclist interloped on the ceremony?